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| Enarra 2007-11-26 ch 1,  | abuseThis is astounding. |
| smartieepants 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseClaire's POV, I never thought about it that way. Amazing writing! Especially the last couple of lines, great idea! |
| Kitty-mrow 2006-12-14 ch 1, | abusewow, that was deep and powerful and so few words! I loved it! |
| your21 2006-12-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is very great. Short, though, but still good. It's so sad too. I really hope Peter doesn't explode.. I like him too much! |
| -XMiloXloveX- 2006-12-06 ch 1, | abuseFallout was awsome as you said. I really liked this ficlet. It was sad, but you put it just the way that I think her thoughts were. I like how she had t he dream as did Peter. It was sad, yet touching, exactly what I think I needed. |
| Aishlin 2006-12-05 ch 1, anon. | abusePleaseplease please email me back... i'm confused on something... i watched episode 11 fallout, but i'm really confused on something... in peters dream/vison that he has... claire runs towards him, stops in front of him and then mouth's something... i cant for the life of me figure out what she mouthed... please i'm begging you... get back to me on this... please! |
| KnightGuardian 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseOh geez, this was spot on, i love your angsty claire with her lost faith, you almost make peter a martered savior or in this case destroyer which is SO sad because i get the impression that all he wanted to do was save the world, do something great. CLiche as it sounds "be a hero" and instead...he's is downfall? So sad, and still so good. Way to go. |
| TheAuthorFormlyKnowAsChanel... 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abusethat was bold how she ran |
| Ally-617-luv-tv 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseI. Loved. This. And Fallout was the best freaking episode ever. Tis all. But awesome job on this, extremly believable, I liked it a lot... and I love how you factored in the dream so that Claire had it too. Kay, NOW tis all. --Ally |
| Dybdahl 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseAt best I'll have downloaded episode 11 by friday, and although I'm trying my best to keep away from spoilers, I just can't. This little ficlett just made me want to see the episode even more. |
| LoneTread 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseWhoa. *claps* Awesome. There's really nothing else to say, except that I agree that Fallout was just about the best thing ever. :) |