Reviews for The Dark Triforce

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myshadowspirit 2008-04-26 ch 20,	abusehahaha! All I had fun reading this. Link's going to be his own hostage? I like the purple milk too! DUDE! It was chopy, but I think that was good because it gave the feel of Link running all over the place to perpare for battle. The only thing is when Link was chasing the bombs, that was a little choppy and I think some people may have a hard time understanding it. I got, it because we had the plan together, but link start talking to the king, then he's suddeny in Hyrule Field. The reader doesn't know that there was a giant huge trail of bombs yet, so that might have been a little confusing. But that's the only thing
myshadowspirit 2008-02-17 ch 19,	abuseOh Ganondorf . . . Listening to Greenday. Very angsty. goes good with the last song, "Whatsername" Ganondorf is crazy alright . . . I love you . . . I want to kill you . . . But he DOESN'T kill her, so he must really love her then . . . or something. This chapter made me want to type my own story, but I left my flash drive down stairs . . . and I'm sick . . . and not wearing pants (cause I know you want to know that) I just had this mental image, of Ganaondorf sitting on his HUGmongo thrown, then Nabooru climbing up the arm of the thrown, then sitting on the back rest, and putting her feet on Ganondorf's shoulders like he was a foot rest. (hahah) It makes me laugh.
myshadowspirit 2008-01-18 ch 18,	abuseyay! poor Link . . .and the letters . . .(laugh) At the end, when Malon was in Link's room I was like . . . what the heck is Malon doing in Link's room . . . then Mark was there and I was like, WHAT THE HECK IS MALON AND MARK DOING IN LINK'S ROOM!? Especially since Mark was on the other side of the bed . . . and you didn't see him right away . . . like he was hiding. But i guess they were 'packing'. wait . . . was Malon packing a stuffed bunny in Link's bag?
myshadowspirit 2007-10-19 ch 17,	abuseHi Casey! Ah . . .Link is so clever, adapting Zalda ways to sute his ow purposes. (wiggles eyebrows) But then He let Navi watch Zelda. That wasn't too smart since navi is easly surcomb to peer pressure. I'm trying to sound smart by usuing big words but countering the effect by spelling them wrong. Malon's priorities are makes tea, THEN make Mark pants. It's impolite to have a guest and not serve them tea
myshadowspirit 2007-09-03 ch 16,	abuseOk, i'm sorta reveiwing this as I go. And I LOVE PINK ROOM! I was wondering how you were going to pull that one off with out it sounded stupid. It's such an old idea but you gotten so much better a writer that you can pull it off flawlessly. And . . .I have to laugh at Nabooru. Man, is she in TROUBLE. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Man . . .Naboorur's so guilty, it makes me laugh. Oh . . .look, a flash back. WoW Impa's nice. Really, I think Nabooru should get a harsh lecture. SHE WAS FOOLING AROUND WITH THE ENEMY! But I still adore Nabooru.
Hydra-Alucard 2007-09-02 ch 10,	abusehey nice story but man its not fair when yall get the same idea's i have for my stories. i mean i just started one where its a sequel for twilight princess where dark link appears and causes havoc in the twilight and then some dark triforce piece is in the middle of the original triforce i mean its crazy but read mines and review for me help a brother out. p.s yu know what we should do we should email nintendo of japan and see if we cann get our stories in a game or atleast to see dark link
myshadowspirit 2007-08-20 ch 15,	abuseAw . . .I thought they were gonna make out . . .Zelda and Link. I like the two new god/goddess. They're creative. Well . . .I havt to go to work so this reveiw is kinda short. Gotta go, by
myshadowspirit 2007-08-14 ch 14,	abuseThanks for telling me you updated. (glare glare) Did you not get my message asking if you did or not? And Eian died . . .I wish you wrote more about him. He was an interesting charater. How could the forget about Ganandorf?! How could they forget about the triforce?!?! That he has?!?!? Those poor stupid people . . .
myshadowspirit 2007-06-26 ch 13,	abuseI see David overly concern with his sister's death. And . . . I love Eian. Yep, some day I'll have a scary boyfriends who's only vocabulary will be to grunt. Then I will show him to the world, as if were the triforce himself, after that . . .I may lose interest, I don't know. LINK'S EVIL!!?!?!??! NOHGDULSIGVBSKUDV! Navi's so cool. "Say what?" hahahahaha! That's so a Navi line. Well . . .I'm tired. It's 11:35 which I'm sure you're somewhat aware of since you's staring at the computer on the other side of the room . . .but maybe you forgot all about time . . . .no! KC, DON'T GO INTO THE LIGHT! . . .or was it the twilite zone . . . Once upon a time there was a muffin
myshadowspirit 2007-05-27 ch 12,	abuseI love Eian. I knew I would. I like his animalisticness. He should growl. Did he growl? I like it when things growl . . .anyway, I like Mark too. He says a lot of great stuff.
myshadowspirit 2007-05-05 ch 11,	abuse(Laughs) Ok, I just tried to sumit a reveiw though thr chapters window! That's how tired I am. My name was in this chapter!1 I'm famous! O.O Link and Zelda are making out!! There should be a time when they make out in peace, instead of having to go off and save the world. Ha . . .they're crazy people
ZombieDragon 2007-05-04 ch 11,	abuseheh, I like this chapter! Stupid cliffies though, they suck! :P Update ASAP, please!
scifigirl77 2007-04-25 ch 6,	abuseWhy are the mermaids being so mean? Stupid mermaids. The guy with the pickles was funny. I'll try to read another one tonight.
scifigirl77 2007-04-15 ch 5,	abuseI really like when they talk to themselves in their head! OK great chapter, was not expecting Todd to go evil. Kinda sad, actually. OK I'll try to read more later!
scifigirl77 2007-04-09 ch 4,	abuseI hate the viney thing with a passion! I'm going to try to read more later, as in Saturday because I'm way too busy this week. But I promise to read more!

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