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| ThePink1 at Reefside.Net 2008-06-10 ch 2,  | abuseOk, stray! Nice opening chapters, and interesting set of characters. Hope to see more soon, A J. |
| Guardian's Light 2007-06-10 ch 2, | abuseI like this story. Hope to see chapter three soon. |
| Xakinera 2007-04-12 ch 2, | abuseLol, the sneak peak was funny even though it shows ElyonxCaleb. My spacebar's broken too! Which slows down typing somuch more and random b's come into my words. So Cornelia's divorced? Widowed? That's what it sounds like. |
| Xakinera 2007-04-12 ch 1, | abuseLove the rhyming. Some of it sounds like their worst nightmares come true or something and the others sound...don't have a word for it. |
| koolkame 2007-04-12 ch 2, | abuseGreat to see the old girls back in action, stray. Hay Lin's problem made me giggle weirdly. Irma's a cop and one of WITCH is pregnant? Sounds familiar...;) The interactions of the kids and their parents were funny, though you left some dramatic openings like Tarannee's niece and Hay Lin's lack of a husband; killing me with curiosity here. Why the 34th generation? Any particular reason? Your preview was... interesting. Three teenage boys introduced=love interests? |
| Nemrut 2007-03-31 ch 2, | abuseInteressting beginning, would like to know what will come next |
| Eli 2007-02-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is really good. Please update soon, Stray. =3 P.S. You have a really good imagination. |
| WWMTgirl 2006-12-11 ch 1, | abuseum, cool |
| DataIntegrationThoughtEntit... 2006-12-10 ch 1, | abuseWorth continuing? Are you kidding me? Of course it is! ^^ I don'' generally read next gen. fics cuz... they're just not my type, but something about your summary caught my attention. :P And I luved it. Really well written, LOLZ. ^^ Keep it up! |
| koolkame 2006-12-06 ch 1, | abuseI accidentally erased my first review so this is a little shorter, but no less enthusiastic. First of all, the characters: very cool names and clearly different people with different interests. Is your team name J.A.M.E.S.? Sorry, couldn't help myself; is the name an homage perhaps? The verse-like nature of the mysterious voice was haunting and the whole chapter carried an ominous feeling that makes me want to know what happens next, you sneaky little thing! You definitely have a plan, you're just worried no one will want to read it. Well, nay, I say! This could be great and should be pursued with vigor. You're actually cometition, I guess, since I'm writing my own next-gen fic, but I can't help but encourage you to continue. Your girls seem a little scarier than mine, though, so DJINN may not come over to play anytime soon. P.S. Just kidding! We'll set up a play date for our kids, but I can't promise Dee will behave herself! |
| Fan 2006-12-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo obviously Caleb is Jenna's dad, but why doesn't she know him? And was he the boy in the mirror? Is he dead or something? Are we going to see the other guardians? And WHO was the creepy voice that talked to all the girls?! Ugh! Too many questions. This is really good so update soon! |
| DayDreamer9 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseWow...I don't get it, are they evil or not? It's interesting, if not confusing, but I'd like to see more ^^ |