awwww (squeal cry)

Oh wow! I loved it! Vegeta can be such a good father to Trunks! It might be hard to see in the show but he is tough on Trunks because he loves his boy and wants him to be all he can be!

*giggles* that was so sweet.

AW! THAT WAS SO CUTE! i don't think Vegeta was ooc at all, you actually captured his feelings really well, you didn't go over board, which i know from experience is extremely hard to do. great job, i think you gave me a cavity!

Very cute fic, I didn't think Vegeta was very out of character. In fact he was more IN-character than he usually is in fics about him and Trunks. he really does care about his son and we do get to see him outwardly show it many times. It was alot of fun reading this fic

Aw! That was sad and wonderful at the same time. That was great. Keep it up.

aw that was so kawaii who would want to send chibi trunks away anyhow awesome fic

aww good job that was cute, v didnt say much but it was effective enough i dont think he wud be that cold hearted to send his son away if he just spoke to him so hes not oc at all great fic! -x-

aw, cute! i feel that the ending is a bit abrupt, but that doesn't take away the awesomeness of this fic! i love it and hope to see more from you...

*tears up* That was so good! This was probably one of the best oneshots I've read in a LOONG time! Two thumbs up!

Hawt Chocolate

its cute

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hope to see more soon

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