Great Job!

I loved this too! Naruto, Kakashi and Shikamaru probably had me cracking up the most. Well done! You have a writing style that I like.

love the story! your story is one of the best story i ever read.

Pretty cute...
Thanks!
Always enjoyed a love story about this lovely couple!

thanks for the 6 japanese dictonary you put at the end of the story
I was lost abit when you put Shimatta in the story.

ur right pein is messed up lol its been a great story love how it ends

Loved it! ^_^ Love the couple! Love the plot! Love the end! I just loved the whole think

LOVE the ending to this chapter. absolutely perfect.

ew. pein. i don't like him that much. even though he looks totally awesome and is kind of hot (sorry konan!). but anyway, i thought this story was going to suck when i read the first paragraph, and then i just kept reading, and i ended up loving it. now...time to get back to my annoying (and addicting and awesome) akatsaku story i'm reading. sigh. it's so hilarious.

With pein and Rain (that's my name!),
The Authoress of Heartbreak,
Rain
♥

AAIIEE!! -runs away screaming her head off-
Midnight: she's kind of busy...um...running away from the retarded snake pedophile. and i am too! bye! -runs away screeching-
Orochimaru: My kitties!! -chases-
AH! -runs away faster- get the fuck away from me you son of a bitch motherfucker pedophile snake perv!

i can't imagine a drunk lee. drinking isn't very...youthful, ya know? XD when (and if) that day comes, i will surely and swiftly run away screaming loudly (because how can you scream quietly?).

-shivers- ok yeah, i'm afraid of jiraiya. he's just fudgin creepy! even though i am extremely curious as to what the Icha Icha book says (yes i want to read it, sorry!), he still freaks me out. that's why i check all my windows in my room before changing. XD

it's not like i'm afraid of Itachi. Besides, authoresses are more powerful. we can do ANYTHING to them. they can only hurt us in the land of computers. :) but itachi is totally capable of hurting me if i put myself into the story. so i'll just not do that! XD obviously.

-shudders- oh god, i hate ibiki. he's so...scary. i mean, more than effin orochigaywad! i hope someone kills that ninja before he hurts sakura even more!

as much as i would want this to end up in a deadly love triangle, i know you have already completed it, so i'll just try to manage. -sigh- but anyway, that was really funny and i was laughing so hard. i think my plushie suffocated -holds up akamaru plushie- i hope neji doesn't die. :)