awesome story!

I love how you wrote it! It conveyed the emotions felt perfectly. Raito's thoughts and emotions contradicting themselves, along with the options as to what might or might not be felt not giving away anything and revealing everything was really cool.

I really like your writting! Keep up the good work!

I wouldn't be surprised if Raito-kun had several dreams like that at some point. *nodnod*

Dark, and the idea with the split personality is great! Loved the story.

Oh I liked this a lot, in fact I'd really like to see this continued with this as a prologue. Anyway, just a thought...

That was excellent, I could feel Raito's emotions. The contradiction his mind and mouth were creating - wonderful.

Short but interesting. I like it. :)

I found this to be very interesting. I liked how it was written, very creative.

Definitely interesting. I like how you had the conflicting thoughts of him arguing against himself, and still kept the text flowing well.