wow how cute... you did mention earlier that chapter 3 is a bit Au so there's no problem with how you brought shizuru's past... it is still cute... thanks... i hope you would create a new lovely shiznat fiction...

loved the last omake. "That was prices" *cackles* nice job

interesting. funny. sweet. cute.

loved it

I'm late in reviewing, actually I just found the story :). I thought it was very touching. Natsuki's gifts to Shizuru couldn't have been more beautiful. I loved it.

I thought it was very sweet. Don't get down on yourself.

Well, your story was beautiful! And VERY funny too. The Omakes were so cute...I didn't watch Mai-Otome, but luckily i know about it to know Natsuki and Shizuru's roles in the story. I saw but VERY few typos if you must know...

Yeah, you should write more stories like this! If you haven't already then i haven't searched yet! Writers like you just give us Shizuru and Natsuki fans such joy...but I personally you defined their relationship and strenghtened it. At least that's my thoughts on it. Would've been interesting to see this drawn by a pro doujinshi artist...

the Omakes would be perfect then!

I know you've been done and finished with this fic for a long time, but a review is a review, right? I LOVE IT! My brain sizzled as I read it. Sizzled from the teasing, blushing, ABSOLUTE cuteness of it all. Natsuki is such a gentlewoman.

This was a very nicely written FF. No mistakes as far as i could see. Your Omakes were especially hilarious. My favorite are 2 and 3. Hope you write something new soon. I look forward to it.

sweet! i love shiznat so much! you're good, really good. and rambutan and papaya is tagalog. pinoy ka? hehe^^ keep up the good work!

AWESOME SHIZNIZ (now a real word meaning: a fine piece of writing.) since i have no idea about Shizuru's past i can forgive you... YAY!! (in general)

OMG! This is a wonderful fic! Poor Natsuki. She always fall for Shizuru's tricks... I love the Omakes too!! Very hilarious. It had made my day!

Write more! Post more!

I love the Omakes! they were funny. but this chapter i think didnt have to be funny. it was so cute. its interesting actually trying to imagine Natsuki playing on the piano when i remember seeing shizuru play in Mai Otome. *squeal* this story kicks **! bah. its alright if you couldnt come up with a real date because this one is so much sweeter. sigh. if only someone could draw that scene of them dancing on the lake...with the candles...so cute! btw...i am so late on reviewing this story. i remember being on time with reviewing but i was soo late. SORRY! gah! but anyways...i love this story and i cant wait for more stories like this!

-renny-chan = a fan :]

aww...that was really cute. bye!

loving it...in fact i love ALL ur fanfics :)
neways, i wz like rolling on the floor laughing at the omakes (which caused 4 separate lectures frm each of my family members)
keep up the gd work and even tho shizuru's past is not true to the story, it worked relli well n i relli liked it XD SHIZNAT FOREVER!!

God...one of these day i'm going to die of laughter because of your fic...

Update soon!