i love this story!! you should make more chapters for it though. you kinda let it end in a cliffy. but its an amazing storyy.

OH! Why did it end?! I dont want it to end!
Can you do a part 3? or better yet make this into a full blown story? PLEASE!

I love this two-shot.

:)monkey-10!(:

Nice work ^^

Oh! I so loved this! Inner Saku is so funny! Awesome work! GaaSaku forever!

spicay lol if he moves like lightning when he's fighting i wonder... lol

Wow, that was amazing. I have to say, this is the best two-shot I have ever read. I'm usually a hard core ItaSaku fan, but I really liked how you portrayed Sakura and Gaara in this story. Keep up the amazing work!

... you are not done!! this needs more ZEST!!(lemon)

Dang...I want more! But it was pretty awesome, and I see what you mean about the exploration of his character. Anyways, great job!

Awhh...! So Cute! x3
Whenever I feel lonely no, i'm going to read this.
AW!

wow good plot

Haha, that was a great ending! This entire chapter was really well paced, with another round of expertly-crafted dialogue and an even more pronounced undercurrent of believable sexual tension. I really enjoyed watching the progression of these characters, and I was grinning like an idiot by the time Gaara's awesomely snarky and perfectly arrogant one-liner rolled around at the end.

All in all a great story, and while I'm sad to see it end, I guess that's also a testament to how good it is. Nice job!

All the best,

JP

Wow.

I gotta say I was a mite skeptical of this pairing at first glance, but you've made a believer out of me. Sakura and Gaara are incredibly in-character despite the AU setting (which I love, don't get me wrong), and the wordplay sings with sharpness and tension simmering just below the surface. I also really enjoyed the point-counterpoint between Sakura and Inner Sakura... that was a great way to throw in some levity. Not to mention the thought of Naruto and Gaara as rival elite Martial Artists is beyond fantastic. Great call there.

I can't wait to read Chapter 2, and kudos to you for crafting such a well-written, readable and enjoyable story. Thanks for sharing it!

All the best,

JP

Ahahhaah what a cute ending!
I absolutely loved the fic. Great job! You're such an awesome writer.

eve if they dont need it i thik a heater would still be nice especially for later.

woot i found it! ive beenlookin 4 this story again