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| mediouzangushatia999 2008-04-13 ch 1, anon. | abusekay |
| Yasha147 2006-12-31 ch 1,  | abuseSo sad, poor Kagura. In the beginning i was a little thrown off by the present tense, but by the end i liked it. Very in charactor, something only a few writers seem to be able to accomplish. It seemed to ramble a little but I liked the overall theme and the mood. I think Kagura and Sesshomaru's relationship gets twisted a bit in the fanfic world so i'm glad to see it done like this. Overall, a sad but beautiful oneshot that makes you greatful for all you have. |