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Yami's Girl 117
2008-08-15 . chapter 3
This story was really awesome! Everytime I come across it, I always read it. It actually got to the point where i printed it out because it was so good, that I kept reading it over and over!
It's very funny and I think that it would be awesome if you took other YGO! season endings and styled it like this.
Lady Teela'Na
2007-08-12 . chapter 3
Loved it! Boys will be boys--ain't it the truth? Great job! :D
Dancers and Pharaohs
2007-08-12 . chapter 3
This was a great story I hope you write more
Island Heart
2007-01-12 . chapter 2
Wow, perfect, this chapter is so great! Poor Isono trying to get some help from Kaiba who is busy staring at Ishizu’s breast!! Marik who tries to sound evil and terrifying but just look like a stupid fool! Yami wants to have a body for himself (I don’t know why…whistling innocently), Joey who is as crazy as usual (how can he be so naïve? A ghost, he thinks that Mai is a ghost!) Tea who is jealous of Joey and Mai (because they are completely free to make out whereas she isn’t) Odion who threatens Marik to tickle him if he doesn’t release his prisoners (Malik and Yugi)…Well, there is still so much to say about this story but I can’t enumerate all of them…It will take hours…hehe…Your story is just perfect to me, so funny and so interesting to read. I love your style! Please, update soon! And if you could make many other stories like this…it will be fantastic!
Lady Teela'Na
2007-01-12 . chapter 2
LOL! Loved the childish battle of "me first", the best. Just something about that image.

All in all a great chapter. AND I am sorry for the short reply, but I have homework that demands my attention. *sigh*
OceanOfMemories19
2007-01-11 . chapter 2
*Laughing her ** off* Poor Joey! The look on his face when he thought she died, I actually saw that and was cracking up. I loved the chapter, I hope you update soon,

Selene
Dancers and Pharaohs
2007-01-11 . chapter 2
Can't wait for the next chapter
OceanOfMemories19
2007-01-05 . chapter 1
You'd better update soon, I hope,

Selene
Island Heart
2006-12-20 . chapter 1
Great story, I love the part with Yami and Tea in the elevator. Too funny! Yami trying to hold back his desires, to resist to carnal temptations. He's usually so serious, if only the end of Battle city was like that. It's funny, I imagined the same scene between the Pharaoh and Anzu, I wondered what took them so long in the elevator and why they kept staring at each other in such suspicious way when they rejoined the rest of the gang. Maybe your story is the answer to these questions. ¨
Please, don't keep us waiting too long, update soon!Plz!
Yami's Girl 117
2006-12-15 . chapter 1
Oh My God, that was awesome. I really liked it!
MoonLiger
2006-12-13 . chapter 1
Oh check this out! Another review! I'm on a roll! ^__^

Again, great story! Mokuba's threat to Seto was just awesome, I love it when he's such a devious little kid! As for Seto...funny how he's only just noticed some, uh, rather "interesting" attributes of her's that somehow escaped his attention before. All that dueling must really have messed up his head...

Keep the humor coming! ^_^
Dancers and Pharaohs
2006-12-07 . chapter 1
Update soon its going to be a great story
TheFemalePharaoh
2006-12-06 . chapter 1
I LOVED IT! ALL OF IT! YOU GO ,PHARAOH...SCORE! Keep Writing, please! Also, please check out my stories, if you please!
Lady Teela'Na
2006-12-06 . chapter 1
Lovin' it! I was laughing so hard at Ishizu and Kaiba's dialouge. What can I say? I adore Trustshipping and Revolutionshipping.

Gotta wonder though, are there security cameras in that elevator? :P
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