|Reviews for Black on White|
| Padfootkicksbutt 1/23/12 . chapter 27
this story is AWESOME! i would love to read more if you ever get around to writing/posting it :P
| Guest 1/23/12 . chapter 27
i LOVE this story! i was rooting for the arya getting pregnant plotline from chapter one, so that baby better not be dead! ;)
| Durya 12/12/11 . chapter 27
Woah... that was gruesome. Arya without any dress on her is being booed(and wooed) by Galbatorix's soldiers. A new low for the proud elf. I love it when she is sexually tortured.
| sarah 11/28/11 . chapter 27
please update! i've read the whole thing and really want to read more... PLEASE! You're such a good writer by the way :)
| kitten63 10/21/10 . chapter 27
Will you ever finish this? It's such a wonderful story.
| xX-PrideOfTheUchiha-Xx 10/8/10 . chapter 27
please...continue this story...its great...its been a long tiime but ii would love to see how it ends...
| Naya 9/2/10 . chapter 1
Yeah,I think in 4th book,Eragon and Nasuada will end up,she will become the next dragon ,this is just my opinion.
| whiterose 4/10/10 . chapter 27
u have a really good story, but i like arya very much; don't torture her so much please. & is there going to be any nice M/A in the next chapters ?
| MasterBrattan 8/17/09 . chapter 6
i don't know, Eragaon and Nasuada seem to have quite a bond in Brisinger
| Solangedrama 6/10/09 . chapter 27
Great fic indeed! The best Arya/Murtagh i came across. And a major cliffy might i add. Update soon!
| allymcg777 6/8/09 . chapter 2
i still don't like the idea of Murtagh and Arya
| allymcg777 6/8/09 . chapter 1
| rebeldesigns 3/20/09 . chapter 27
Please please please don't tell me that you're not going to return to this story. I know that it's been over a year, but such a good story like this does not deserve to be left open! This is such a well-written, unique and interesting plot... don't let it go to waste.
Keep it real,
P.S. I'm still waiting for you to finish 'Why Canon and Fanon Don't Mix"! Don't forget about that one )
| jj 3/16/09 . chapter 27
So u ever gonna update this story?
| Stripysockz 2/2/08 . chapter 27
Sorry this review took so long, I tried to review it earlier, but the site went down or something when I submitted the review, and it didn't work. Then my brother was hogging the computer all the rest of the week.
Absolutely awesome chapter, probably the best yet. That bit at the end - I actually had a tear in my eye! Though - did the baby die, or did Galby just think so because of the illusion spell? That bit was kinda confusing.
Yay, Hathcyn's being a good guy! I knew he was! I really can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!