i don't know, Eragaon and Nasuada seem to have quite a bond in Brisinger

Great fic indeed! The best Arya/Murtagh i came across. And a major cliffy might i add. Update soon!!

i still don't like the idea of Murtagh and Arya

eew!

Please please please don't tell me that you're not going to return to this story. I know that it's been over a year, but such a good story like this does not deserve to be left open! This is such a well-written, unique and interesting plot... don't let it go to waste.

Keep it real,
CW

P.S. I'm still waiting for you to finish 'Why Canon and Fanon Don't Mix"! Don't forget about that one =)

So u ever gonna update this story?

Sorry this review took so long, I tried to review it earlier, but the site went down or something when I submitted the review, and it didn't work. Then my brother was hogging the computer all the rest of the week.

Absolutely awesome chapter, probably the best yet. That bit at the end - I actually had a tear in my eye! Though - did the baby die, or did Galby just think so because of the illusion spell? That bit was kinda confusing.

Yay, Hathcyn's being a good guy! I knew he was! I really can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!

Yeah, that took forever, but it was well worth the wait. This chapter was wonderful, so full of drama. You did a great job with details and emotions. I look forward to the next update!

And I'm with a couple other reviewers. Confused. xD Is the baby really dead, or does Galbatorix jut think so? I guess I'll find out next time. Very creative way of having Murtagh find out - much more realistic then Arya telling him.

That was definitely an interesting way for him to find out. I wonder if it'll survive the pregnancy...

Is it just me, or does Hathcyn actually have a heart? Maybe i was reading between the lines where I shouldn't have, but he seemed like he was trying to help Arya out. If so, I definitely have more respect for him as a character.

s'okay. It was worth the wait. I've had school stuff too, so I can sympathize.

So, I'm a little confused is the baby alive and Galbotrix just thinks it's dead or is it the other way around?

OMG it took SO long to read this chap lol (probably cause im studying for french final at same time...) but i liked and omg poor arya! eragon get off your lazy butt and rescue her!! lol so much for "loving" her

poor arya shes been through a lot & yay murtagh shows how much he loves her.i cant wait 2 know whats going 2 happen wit murtagh and arya!just please please please update soon!

Wow that was one very dramatic chapter, especially concerning Arya! Well done :D

jeeze , you like to tortue Ayra! You havnt updated in a loonng time! But i cant say anything because i update my story about 3 ties a year no joke. lol, anyways AAH! she lost the babY! And all those men were gona rape her?! *shudder* that is one thing that i cant stand. hope it doesnt happen!