Don't ever change this one.

Don't ever edit it.

It doesn't need it.

Trust me.

Very well done. Sometimes I wonder the same thing.

OMG, that is so sad! And, in a way beautiful! You have captured a different aspect of Sora that I never thought of before. Biyo

Sniff Poor Sora

you have an older sibling. why didnt you ever tell me? well that was really good but i dont think that is true bout sora. whatever it was still pure talent.

Wow. That's beautiful, touching. Sora is one of the best characters for that role. You've described the longing for an older sibling quite well. Excellent work!