| Reviews for a SasuNaru Christmas |
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Muffin Ruler 3/23/07 . chapter 4Please update soon, I want to know how Sasuke will react to all this! |
Mystic-Neko85 3/14/07 . chapter 4Souldn't it be five months till due date if he's only four months? Cuz you put 'It’s been four months since Sasuke left on his mission' wouldn't that make Naruto four months along? |
Soaha 2/8/07 . chapter 3AWW! I love this! Update soon! |
Nayokukiasa 2/4/07 . chapter 3hey i am enjoying your story so much! _ loving this and the lemon was perfect. *giggles* i noticed that Sasuke isn't very happy at the begging of the story. If he trys to hurt u, i can be your bodyguard free of charge. and protect u from him. _ (\_/) ('.') (")_(")o -Shimiko Himikari Akatsumi- |
Fat Anorexic 2/3/07 . chapter 3Great chapter! I think you should write a time skip. I just can't wait until Sasuke comes back! E! And with your writer's block...Maybe you can make an outline. I make an outline with the basic idea of what I want to happen in the chapter. From there I branch of into separate ideas. And at the end of my chapter outline, I can have a few different choices on what I want to happen next. For example, say you want Sasuke to come back next chapter. First, you can choose whether or not you want the chapter to be light-hearted, serious, or lemony. . Then, you can think of different scenarios to fit the mood. Like if it were light-hearted, you could have Sasuke trying to jump Naruto the second he got home, but being interupted by the baby. Hehe, that'd be evil. Or for serious, you could have a chapter with Naruto and Sasuke reuniting and spending the day with each other and the baby. The possibilities are endless! *shakes fists* Er, hopefully I kinda helped you with your writer's block. I know how that feels. I've been afflicted with that damn writer's block for months! Anyways, good chapter and I hope to see your next chapter soon! Fattie |
AMassarano 2/3/07 . chapter 3poor naru-chan...having to go shopping let alone without sasuke... good chappie though! update soon please! |
yukiislikesnow 2/3/07 . chapter 3Yay This is a cute story. But too bad Sasuke isn't there to share in the 'joys' (lol) of a pregnant Naruto |
ShotaroxPhillip 2/1/07 . chapter 2update |
Fireflyleo 12/10/06 . chapter 2This story is so cute. I can't wait till you review. |
BloodGushes 12/8/06 . chapter 2WOW! This is a great story! PLEASE! Update! Thank you |
inumoon3 12/8/06 . chapter 2I wish Sasuke would hurry up and get back from his mission so he can come back to Naruto already! Great chapter, can't wait till the next update! |
Hikory 12/7/06 . chapter 2*squeal* that was so wanted to have children and now he knows what it's like. O . o naruto can clean?I never pegged him for one of the clean then again it could have been the fact that sasuke likes to have things neat but then again it may or may not be the naruto would look so kawaii in that position,I would like to find that pic if it exists,I'm sure sasuke would love that pic too.I'm glad that sakura promised to keep it a secret.I can't wait for the next chap update soon pleaze. |
Fat Anorexic 12/7/06 . chapter 2Aw, cute! Very fluffy story...which I LOVE! Maybe, a longer third chapter...? *pouts* Please? Great chapter and can't wait for the next one! Fattie |
Fat Anorexic 12/7/06 . chapter 1Oh! Nice story! 'Bah'-Chan' is spelled 'Baachan.' Great story, keep it up! Fattie |
AMassarano 12/7/06 . chapter 2i like it so far! keep going! update soon please! kit-chan |