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| Michi the Mischevious 2008-04-21 ch 14,  | abuseThis was a truly wonderful story on multiple levels. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
| Gryffindor620 2007-01-14 ch 14, | abuseThis was so good. Great Story!! Update Soon Son!! |
| Gryffindor620 2007-01-11 ch 13, | abusePobresita Sara. Catherine will make it all better!! Great Chapter!! Update Soon Son!! |
| clarkson04 2007-01-10 ch 12, | abuseHey loe this story so much please cary on with this as soon as i want more xx |
| Gryffindor620 2007-01-09 ch 12, | abuseGOOD JOB SARA!! Great Chapter!! Update Soon Son!! |
| Caelestis 2007-01-08 ch 7, | abuseHa! I was right! Now... you need to make the codes a little more complicated - that one took me less than a minute to crack, so I'm sure that a CSI like Sara would have picked up on it a little quicker, not that it is a 'secret code'... honestly, that is the most common code ever used in the english language. For someone majoring in science, as I suspect the killer to be, perhaps it would have been better to use the tables of elements to create a code... or something that would throw off the CSI team a little more. Just think misdirection... plot, and tension. |
| Caelestis 2007-01-08 ch 6, | abusem... if I'm not mistaken, those numbers are actually a code that says "you are next". Interesting, if not a little obvious. There are a lot of grammatical mistakes that you need to fix, as well as spelling, but you are well on your way to a great peice of fiction. |
| jamie 2007-01-08 ch 12, anon. | abuseI REALLY LIKE THIS STORY. I THINK SARA WAS KIND OF DUMB TO DO THAT BUT IT ALL WORK OUT. GOOD STORY. |
| Knight Wulf 2007-01-08 ch 12, | abusevery good chapter thanks |
| clarkson04 2007-01-08 ch 11, | abuseHey great chapter i want so much more please carry on with this as soon as xx |
| chawkchic 2007-01-07 ch 11, | abuseContinues to keep me intrigued and guessing. I hope that known of our people gets hurt especially Sara and Catherine. Love that Catherine is open and doesn't care who knows how she feels about Sara. I will be looking for more, hopefully soon! |
| Gryffindor620 2007-01-05 ch 11, | abuseOh what does Sara have up her sleeve?! Wait, is she even wearing sleeves? ANYWAY!! LOL!! Great Chapter!! Update Soon Son!! |
| Cherrydrops12 2007-01-05 ch 11, | abuseamazing |
| Cherrydrops12 2007-01-04 ch 10, | abusedam.. |
| clarkson04 2007-01-04 ch 10, | abuseHey lovin this want muc more please carry on with this as soon as xx |