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IVIaedhros
2008-01-27 . chapter 9
Wow...a decently written Obidala. What are we coming to these days?
Verity Kindle
2007-04-27 . chapter 9
AUGH! Why, PK?! Why do you do this?! Do you just enjoy the feeling of crushing your readers' souls with your pen?! Are we crunchy, that you should torment us with Obi-Wan-Torture? GAH>
Kenobifan
2007-04-22 . chapter 9
My heart broke into a bunch of pieces...

I can't talk much, when I read tragedy..death.. *cries*

Poor, poor, poor Obi... and, and, and... Padme *cries more*
ObiKenobi
2007-04-18 . chapter 9
not..cool. You do realize you just killed off one of the main characters, and it was YOURSELF. I really hope it's some sort of trick, just to keep the rest of us in suspence.
Would Leia really remember that? If so, awesome!lol
That was way sadder than it needed to be..I look forward to an update and an explanation!*demands explanation* What the heck happened?!
SUSPENCE is KILLING ME! MUST...KNOW...
Verity Kindle
2007-04-04 . chapter 8
you are so, so evil. Don't hurt Obi-Wan! you bad, bad woman!!
ObiKenobi
2007-04-04 . chapter 8
Hey, great chap. I hate this SUSPENCE! so basically they're screwed at the moment. who attacked them? vader? ohh, hope not..*gasp*anakin's in love with padme!*jumping to so many conclusions* OMGS! hurry and update, I MUST KNOW!
Kenobifan
2007-04-04 . chapter 8
Force almighty...

That wasn't nice at all. *throws rotten tomatoes*

You had me holding my breath while I was reading..

Get back here and update. :)
weirdtaste
2007-03-31 . chapter 7
omg he killed her didn't he?

lol :D
ObiKenobi
2007-03-25 . chapter 7
*gasp* he's home! YAY! Can't wait to see what happens next. I'm assuming she fainted...Nice little party memory though, really enjoyed that, cause it sounds exactly like the Obi-Wan I rp! Update soon! And sorry I couldn't review earlier.
Verity Kindle
2007-03-24 . chapter 7
Wow. That was unexpected. They're going to get executed, but at least they got to see each other again. Yay for Obi-Wan!!
Kenobifan
2007-03-23 . chapter 7
AH H H H H ! Obi came to see Padme? OMG.. I'm freaking out here!!

YOU surprised the sith right out of me. My heart is beating a 100 mph...

Why did he come back? Not that I'm complaining. They both need each other so much. YAY Obidala!! So is he going to take her back to Tatooine?

"Padme couldn’t help but check out his ** quickly, before looking in his eyes, smiling." Nice touch, who could resist Obi's **? LOL

I have the biggest smile on my face. I can't wait for more! :)
Elven Archer
2007-03-23 . chapter 7
OMG! I love this story! Please please please don't stop! You are a very talented writer, and I can't wait to hear more!
Verity Kindle
2007-03-19 . chapter 6
Oh, man, I love the angst, but this story is so sad. Will there be a happy ending after all? How AU does this get?
Kenobifan
2007-02-18 . chapter 6
Luke took a big chance seeing Ben.

Aw, Ben should of asked Luke what was on his mind. Poor kid.

Looking forward to seeing what happens next.. :)
Mony19
2007-02-12 . chapter 5
Didn't realize you had updated.

Good Chapter

They got to tell these kids the truth eventually. I know they are trying to protect them but still. I like that you brought in Sabe.

ud soon
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