Wonderful. You capture their voices well.

Dude, THE END! What about spike and River? And Leery and Jayne (Rofl-ed over that, by the way). Are spike and Ilyria going to set up Angel Investigation's again, what?

Please continue, PLEASE!

This was so wonderfully in character, I really must salute you. I enjoyed every minute. :D My favorite scene has to be when Jayne was asking Illyria about her clothes, and River points out that no, no one else is wondering how she takes them off. That was hilarious. And Illyria kindly demonstrating how she DOES undress was great. So was Jayne's reaction. "Her hair is natural. (It's hot but it ain't normal.)" Hahahah!! XD

Spike and River "dancing" was a lovely touch, and I really like the idea of River being the Slayer. Very nice. Thank you, BTW, for not killing off my fave character, namely Spike. V.V I was definitely cheering for Illyria when she ripped the gunmen apart. Her and Spike's strange need for each other was handled well, and added some good depth to the story. As well as the sort-of-kinship between Spike and River. If you ever continue this, I hope you can give us more of this lovely interraction.

Squeeing aside, I didn't spot any typos or grammatical errors, though I admit I did burn through it rather quickly. (sheepish smile) POV shifts are just fine when they are handled well, which you've done here. It is very clear who is telling the story when. I do find it interesting that you chose to write Illyria in the present tense, and italicized all her scenes. It makes her moments stand out and seem rather odd and stilted, which fits her character.

I do have one teeny question...how did Spike and Illyria know Lorn was in this dimension, and how to find him??

Good job, I enjoyed your fic muchly. Or rather it was very shiny. ^^ Thank you for sharing it!! --s2m, who tends to write long reviews (another sheepish smile)

I really liked this. It was well written, and the characters were believable and fun to observe. Good job!

Interesting. I like the idea of River being a Slayer. Great story. Hope to see more from you soon!

I Love this. Any more on the way?

I liked it.

Wonderful story! Very much enjoyed their futuristic adventure. :)

NO! It can't end like this! Please, make this a story, it's really good! :)