Very sweet and your showed the characters' character (XD) very well

It was a short piece but I think it still got the message across. I think my favorite is that Shikamaru turned his eyes away from her before muttering "I'm still looking." I loved the irony in it and it helped to emphasize that he never meant it in a literal manner. Great story!

aw super cute.

Aww, that was sweet... ^^

I like it! She should be happy she still has her eye. she could have ended up like kaka

THE perfect ShikaIno.
I don't think I can say more...I just love how the most defining parts of their personalities were brought out in the shortest little scene.
Beautiful.

Aw! I love this peice! Your a damned good writer ^.^
I don't think it was to gory >.> ^^;; considering I get the same reaction from people XD

I loved the fact that Shika was still with her, just like he would be in the anime =D

that was beautiful...i love gore

hey im not such an inoxshika fan but this is realli good!!

okay,
I love all your stories and I couldn't do any better so I can offer no constructive criticism.
But I said that I would review so here I am.

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Aw...sweet Shikamaru (huggles!) Sweet story, too! *fav~

AWW! BEAUTIFUL!! I could actually see it happening!! SWEET! GORGEOUS! I love it!

though it's short, it's definitely wonderful...well it's okay ino...you are not ugly..at least not to shikamaru, right right shika!? hehe..

anyways =)..a great one shot! well done!

aww! the ending was really sweet! and i loved the detailed descriptions you used! all in all, it was a great fic! (adds to favs)