Great story but I have to say that Kira seems to bit out of character. First of all he is the kind of guy who would understand the situation. Second he is not as fond of his MS as you make him out to be.

That was a good story. Loved it. Especially the ending to it. You should write a sequel to it. I love to see what Kira Does to Athrun.

nice one

love it love it love it (five days later) love it love it love it!
so beautiful.
stupid kira...
i love pure asucaga.

this was good. athrun is damn horny. lol.

i ReAllY LikE yOOr sToRy...yOOh pUt aLoT oF dEtAil && tHoUgHt iNto iT sO I cAn REaLLy PiCtuRe wHat yOOr WriTiNg...

WriTe mOrE sToRieS...hE hE...

COOL!

Haha. So you were getting horny too? LOL Kira the dense one woots XD

haha ..!! i wonder wad would happen to Athrun wakakakaka!!

i really never thought kira as the over prtective brother type, or that dumb

**, Kira was so freaking slow. god would I give not to have a overprotected like Kira? Man good lemom!!

*sigh* I really love your fics! You are so good... especially with lemony fics.. not too pervy but just right.. heheh.. :D

I'm in love with Kira here... he's too funny.. Great work!

Ha Ha HA! Ahthrun is in so much trouble...love it...was getting hot in there (where's the fan? *wink!*)...awesome job

oh wow! ur awesome!! that was such a hot and sexy lemon! ur so talented and funny! very nice one-shot, hope u write more!

Nice!