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Frankl's girl
2006-12-13 . chapter 2
MERLA: *blinks* g-gero had a daughter? *gulps*
UNI: *mutters something under breath*
MN: *hits deck in a fit of laughter*
MERLA: O.O... what?
MN: Oh kami, Uni. you kill me! *Clutches stomach* Uni said... she... she said that Gero made Cell right?
MERLA: *nods slowly* and..?
MN: well, then Cell is kinda making out with his sister!
MERLA: EEP... *feels ground crack* double eep. *falls into chasm* ah!
MN: *laughs hysterically*
UNI: erm. PLEASE UPDATE! *ITs*
aquasage
2006-12-10 . chapter 2
Aww! snuggled with a unicorn ^^!

Better hide that camera...those pictures will embarass him for life! Especially in enemy hands!

Dang, the z fighters showing up does kill a mood! Especially since women can't stand thier troop anyway! Those guys are the kings of rejects, when it comes to failed stead relationships and not driving women crazy or angry!
StormRaven333
2006-12-10 . chapter 2
STORM:You have Yahoo Messenger! Sweet!
RAVEN: *takes more shots of Cell on camera*
STORM: What you doing Raven?
RAVEN:... Webcasting!
STORM: That's Raven XD
RAVEN: *starts to run*
STORM: Hey where you goi- *notices Cell awake* KUSO! *takes off* um...hot chapter BTW. Goku is always ruining the mood. UPDATE!
Zaya Ayame
2006-12-07 . chapter 1
Awesome!! Please update soon ^^ This so awesome!!


-~Zaya_Ayame~-
cutelittlekitten18
2006-12-07 . chapter 1
this is a great and funny, god how maney time can she pass out lol. please say your going to update soon love to know what happens next
StormRaven333
2006-12-07 . chapter 1
Dude that was...awesome!
UPDATE!
^^
~Storm
aquasage
2006-12-06 . chapter 1
I don't what's funnier...her pasting out AGAIN, or your end comments after that! LOL!

(crying tears of laughter)
LOOL!

I'm like (upon the beginning of the story) thinking "Wow she came up with a another story so soon, and it's funny and drama!"
But then to find that with story has probably originated in your mind possibly well before the others you wrote...starting this story just up now...and the girl passes out right at the end of the first chapter!

LOL!

it's almost like a one shot, and the story has to wait for her to wake up, lol!

She didn't even get to left the room!

I mean, even the teacher got out of the room without even passing her into the hall...I hope their was a second door...to think that old man bolted out of the door not even knowing cell's out in the hall, but just fleeing!

She got bad survival skill! standing in the middle of the room?
well, guess you can't much or bend much in skin tight hugging clothes, but at least she could dodge under the table!

Cell was wondering why NO one told him that gero had a daughter...hm, I can think of a few good reasons...and namely the first being that he eats everyone, gero died before he was finished, and the computer is the only thing that even talked around him! There was no one! LOL!

I wonder what he plans to do now?

Why did he go after her in the first place or enter the building for that matter? Golly, he's choosy over who he terorizes or is interested?
so many questions...thanks for the new story^^!
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