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Kitty
2009-06-14 . chapter 14
Love you. Love this story. It was nice to see developement on Daisuke, he barely gets any screen time in the manga or anime. My favorite part thought was the Alice and Rin interactions. They are so sweet. I love your plot and the OCs, it is really challenging to realistically and smoothly incorporate OCs into a story.
Kirihana
2007-01-17 . chapter 14
I just read this whole story in one sitting. But I loved it! It's so nice to see someone actually doing a PSME fic, since most people don't even know what it is. This is definitely going on my favorites.
tess
2006-12-16 . chapter 1
I'm going to read your other stories as well when I get the chance. :D
tess
2006-12-16 . chapter 14
Very nice ending. Makes me long for more though . . . *sighs* Your story was a real treat. You characterized everyone so perfectly!! I loved the romance you added to the story as well, and the Rin/Alice fangirl in me squealed in delight. There was one thing that I may have missed . . . but why was Kiku so interested in Mikuro? Was it because he was a human with ESP powers? I guess I'll never know, but overall this story has been a rare find and thank you for posting it. :D
tess
2006-12-16 . chapter 13
I like how Haru atoned is this chapter. I really feel that the mangaka of PSME should have concluded it like this, and not have ended it like she had. I can't believe there is one more chapter and its over . . . I have to tell you this has been an enthralling story and I have enjoyed reading it very much.
tess
2006-12-16 . chapter 12
Poor Rin, he always seems to get the blunt of all the action. XD I'm so happy he going to be alright . . .
tess
2006-12-16 . chapter 11
And the drama continues . . . this story has me hooked. I'm so glad this story is completed, or else I would die of suspense!!
tess
2006-12-16 . chapter 10
So the secret is out!! I wonder what will happen next!!
tess
2006-12-16 . chapter 9
Poor Alice! I want to give her a hug . . . dumb Hinagiku.
tess
2006-12-16 . chapter 8
Wow . . . this chapter had so much juicy drama. I hope you continue writing more Please save my earth fan fiction!! ^^
tess
2006-12-16 . chapter 7
-swoons-

jfljdlfjdlfj . . . I loved that last bit of Rin/Alice.
tess
2006-12-16 . chapter 6
Teleportation? Why didn't I think of that? XD Yay . . . Haru is going to help!!
tess
2006-12-16 . chapter 5
I hope they go help them . . . but how will they get to the moon? I guess I'll just have to keep reading.
Tess
2006-12-16 . chapter 4
Issei/Sakura!! My OTP! hehe :D I can't wait till the aliens show up . . .
tess
2006-12-16 . chapter 3
That Rin/Alice moment made me swoon. Your very good at writing them. Reading this story makes me feel like I'm reading a chapter of Please save my earth. *goes to read next chapter*
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