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| Hanz the Bunny 2007-05-03 ch 1,  | abuseaww! that was really cute! i loved the whole, "it's still your fault" line at the end. adorable! and o, bareback jack...now tell me, how could a story with THAT be bad? really. good job! |
| sej1986 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant! I love it! I think you captured the J/C dynamic really well! |
| HoratioCaine 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, i wish there were a lot more of these out there because the relationship between jack and chloe i think is the most fascinating ever. Great insight into how the act around each other. |
| Backroads 2006-12-28 ch 1, | abuseHeck, that's just cute! I know, I know, it was a semi-serious situation, but for a character study it just came off as cute. And no, I did not see it as romantic--I have never seen any romantic chemistry between those two whatsoever. But I saw this piece as a very plausible interaction between them, in a deeply platonic way. This fic really showed a fascinating friendship between them. Well-written,too. Not over the top, but quick, easy reading to really move the pace along, especially with all the bumping wounds going on. Great job! |
| Claire M C 2006-12-10 ch 1, | abuseI really, really liked this! I hope to see more from you in the future :) |
| erica1531 2006-12-08 ch 1, | abuseVery cute! And you did a really nice job of showing the relationship we see on the show: completely platonic, and without actual hint of romance, and yet the unique bond is there. The bond is most definitly there, and leaves the reader thinking not that there WAS something more there but that maybe there should or one day will be. |
| happyhooligan2001 2006-12-08 ch 1, | abuseYes, you're right. Writing Chloe is way too fun. I'm addicted. This story shows her with all her crankiness and trust. |
| Eleanor J. 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abuseNice characterization. Good job. |
| Jessie611 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abuseI love it when Jack and Chloe are snarky with each other and you portrayed them so well. It's great how underneath it all you know that they care about each other. |
| saturn567 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abuseloved it! |
| Bubble Sheep 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abuseGood fic |
| ToothFairy 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is exactly the kind of Jack/Chloe stuff I like: nothing explicit, nothing that even really hints at romance, but the hints are there... just like on the show! More of this please! :) |
| stacey james 2006-12-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell written - i love Jack and Chloe together |