OMG! You have to finish this story! You've got me hooked on this one. I can't wait to find out if Ed finds Al and also what happens with the alchemist murderer that is still on the loose. Please continue!

You did a fine job in writing a twisty nightmare. You should update this story.

Good story and poor Ed! I'm curious to what is going on but I'm sure that the homoculi are involved somehow. Also I hope Ed does find Al (and that the murderer whose on the loose doesn't do anything).

Keep up the very good work and please update soon!

EagleBlaze (aka Shadow and Mist)

*clap, clap* b.r.a.v.o our friend told me to review your story and i really enjoyed this one

C'mon please D:!!
That week you needed is taking too long y'know D:
I'm gonna die here D':

I apologize in advance for any OOC-ness on Doko's part. It's 1:30 am and I'm tired. But OMG~ Fanfics = addicting.

This was, by far, one of the best FanFics I've ever read. It's up there on my top list, and I'd read these two chapters over and over again until you UPDATE (no pressure, take as long as you need, but...I really want a new chapter!!). Don't worry, Edward is completely in character (if not a bit delusional) and I love Roy's reaction with all of this. The way you meshed Edward's dream with reality due to fever (yay, fever! I mean, uh...oh no, poor Ed. XDD) and how you took one of the most common plots for fanfictions and turned it into something a bit more unique.

It isn't often when I come accross a story that's in-character (seriously, people, Roy DOES call Edward by his name sometimes...he's more than just a subordinate! He's a...he's an Edward, too!), well-written and not typed in chatspeak with bad punctuation. ("lyk omg dis iz mai sotri plz revew lol!11 lyk so 1 day ed waz in da ran omg wat wil hapn 2 him reed 2 find out lol")

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!

-cough- Anyway, yeah! Update please, but take as long as you need, as said before.

...yeah, I just acted like a total suck up, didn't I? Damnit...

~Doko

Wow... A well written piece. I come across so few of these that when I actually find a good one it makes me wish that it had no end. Saddly, the end is never hard to find...

The name is from 'Brothers' the English version of the Russian song sung by none other than Vic himself. I keep looking for ways that the song might have been incorperated into this fiction but all I can come up with is that this is the boy's attempt to "live." Not many people name their fics after things which ACTUALLY make SENSE *gasp*.

Yeah, so... I await the next chapter (I've already read chp2).

Argh D:!!
I've been waiting for months D:!
And I don't mind to wait a little longer, but please D:!!
PLEASE hurry up.
I just love your fic and I'm just dying for another chapter.
If my calculations are right you're supossed to update in 12th March. But I hate waiting for something I just like so much D:!!
(Now, if I think about it's not that much until that date... But then what? I'll have to wait another 4 months xDD)

Anyway, you're a great writer, really, but you make us wait a little too much, don't you think D:?

Kisses for you
Bye~!

PD: Sorry if I was rude or something, I'm in... how should I say it... Fangirl-mode? Yeah, that 8D.
(Oh, my english sucks, I know it, but please forgive him, he refuses to get better)

This was a VERY interesting read; quite well-written and everyone in character (except for in Ed's wacko dream, but that's understandable). I do hope you're continuing to write this; I want to see how he resolves the fight he had with Al. Anyway, keep writing ^_^

10. 9. 8. 7. 6. 5. 4. 3. 2. 1.

CAN SOMEONE TELL ME WHAT THE ** IS GOING ON?

That was really good! I loved it. Can;t wait for the next chapter!

Hey! I love this new story! Update soon, OK? I have to admit, I'm a real sucker for ones where Ed is afraid of Roy but Roy really didn't mean him any harm.

Omigosh that was so good! I love how you mesh the dream with reality - so lifelike. Keep it up!

I'm loving this story to bits! I also ponder the question why people think Mustang never uses Ed's name. Please continue, we eat angst like Gluttony eats...well everything else.

Great chapter! I really thought Mustang was gonna kill him there for a while o.O!
Looking forward to the next chapter immensly
M.E.