It was really a great story compared to most, a real pitty you won't finish it, it was gettign better each chap.

Sorry to be the one to break this to you guys, but the story will unfortunately remain unfinished.
Commander Argus sadly passed away in late 2008. He will be sorely missed. :(

I SO HOPE THAT THIS IS NOT THE END OF THE STORY I LIKE TO SEE MORE OF THIS I HOPE U MAKE THIS INTO A 100 PLUSE LONG STORY COME ON I KNOW U WANT TO

and C A that's pretty much how I remembereds those episodes.

Where to they go from here.


Larry (Sentinel 103)

I really enjoyed reading this story and have already (for the most part) read "It finally happen" series I hope you continue to finish this story and the rest soon. :)

Great chapter. I bet Ron is thinking about the Electro-Static Illuminator Dementor's ancestor built in Rewriting History. Can't wait for your next chapter.

This is really cool to see Kim and Ron get together the way they have at this point in time instead of at the end of "So the Drama".
I'm very much eager to see how things go and work out from here for them.

It's the Rufinator to the rescue. I wondered how you were going to handle the sitch, without Ron coming to the rescue. Rufus never really got any attention in the original episode, nice to see him play a major role in this version.

Eagerly awaiting more!

So... yeah, this is a bit late, but whatever. Also I never review things... hm... Maybe suddenly getting into KP again really -is- driving me slowly insane.

*Ahem* Anyway. Nice fic. I loved the stab at ShegoxKim there, especially coming in the midst of such a serious conversation. But I'm someone who enjoys mixing comedy and drama in similar fashions *shrugs*. Also stuff like KimxRon brings out my inner fanboy, and this was good for that, definitely.

There is one thing, which I don't think anyone else has said, and it's really way late for me to give you advice, but I'm going to go ahead and say it anyway. That is that I think the conversation between Kim and Ron drags a bit throughout... I mean, it's really pretty much the entirety of the chapter, and over the course of that time it almost feels like maybe they cover the same ground more than once or something. I can't completely put my finger on it, but it was the sensation I got when I read this the other day and it persisted when I reread it just now to be sure. So, I dunno, maybe see if a certain part of the conversation feels like it's going back to something that has already been said, or else if the dialogue just loses some steam or something (I kind of doubt that because I thought the dialogue was mostly pretty good, but...).

All in all, though, this was a fun read, and I look forward to reading the rest.

Still very much enjoying this. After the trauma of Graduation and the end of the series, its nice to ... go back to the beginning, as it were. Well written, in-character, and filled with the right touches of emotion and humor.
RH

Nice twist to the end of the "Bonding" episode. Really can't wait to see what you do with "Bad Boy". That should be interesting to see since the two of them are dating now and he won't have to try to get a date to the wedding.

Wow awsumness! keep those chapters comin coz this is my fave story so far x

I totally love this story, keep going!!

i absolutely love it update asap and i will be eternally greatful!

This is definitely one of my favorite fics. Keep up the good work, and please update soon.