Very nicely done!

I just thought I'd point out that the 'True Source' is another way of describing the 'One Power', not the 'True Power'. But I have a feeling you knew that, and it's just a careless error - your book knowledge seems to be much better than average, judging by the rest of the story. The only other beef I have with this is the 'fleshy globe' bit. That's a smut cliché from hell. Other than those nitpicks, it was a great story, despite being more innocent than the stuff I usually like to read.

Also, I'm considering writing a Rand/Moridin piece. I've never thought there was much slash potential in WoT, but those two are an exception, and the dream scene in the latest book inspired me even further. :)

Interesting but a little lacking after the warning put to it. Granted I come from the world of anime fanfiction where yaoi, even hardcore stuff, is more prevelant than it is not so maybe that's why I notice this. Not that I would have wanted to read anything like that anyway, it tends to ruin the story...

I love this! I do wish slightly that I hadn't read it as I had no idea who Morindin was. So I looked it up, and that gave away lots of the story. Oh well, that'll teach me to read fanfics before finishing the series. Also the cleansing of Saidin thing.
Anyway, I thought this was a beautifully written fic. Well done.

Very intresting. I hope there would be others too. Are you going to continue?

Beautifully done! Rand is a bit too calm, but the wonderful concept you have here couldn't have been executed nearly as well without a bit of creative liscense. :P I loved the glimpse into Moridin's mind, too- I'm not sure I've ever read a fic in his POV before.

Wow, I'm shocked that you haven't recieved any reviews on this story yet!

Hmm, a RandxMoridin fanfiction was honestly the last thing that I would have suspected, but after reading this, I find it more and more enjoyable. I loved the way that you wrote it! I think that this story would be fantastic if you decided to make in into an actual story.

Keep up the great work!

Vadraxia