That was a really great story, I especially love the children and zuko being a dad :) great work!

I just loved it! It was creative and personal, and the idea was sometime I don't think God would have thought of. ;D I love idea so much, it is hard to explain.

I like how Mai died (NOT BEING MEAN OR ANYTHING)it made the story better. I love the children, that was just great. I would have had Lu Zuo say "Mommy!" to Katara as his first word or something, but that doesn't matter. I like how Katara taught Maiko waterneding moves.

I was VERY happy with this story, and I LOVE the way you ended it with Aang (not having there was a good move). It will keep me up tonight. So much for homework.

~Lealia

This is one of the most romantic stories I have read in a long, long time. Everything in it was perfect from start to finish, and I will be adding it to my collection of gems.

Thank you for the wonderful and beautiful experiance.

LOL! Aang is HILARIOUS!

Not going to lie, I've seen this plot done before on multiple occasions...but none of them were remotely as good as this. Good writing can reenergize the most-used plot and you've done just that.

This was a joy to read and I thank you for taking the time to write it.

This looks interesting.

Breathtaking. Just, breathtaking.

I highly enjoyed this fanfiction. It was well written and very entertaining. Of course there were some spelling mistakes but everyone makes those. I loved the mystery of the shadow that destroyed the Fire Nation. I was half scared that it was Aang commiting those crimes but it was an amazing plot twist to have been Jet. I can't wait to read more!

And the tea drinking Iroh proves his brilliant once again. I love their getting to know each other, and I like as the nights went on their conversations got longer. I am so enjoying the way he have been a able to keep these two in character and have not rushed any of the events. It's all flowing a nice pace.

*grins* she made him laugh.

a really great story. well written and laugh out loud amusing at times. ^^. awesome job Rayne. i'm looking forward to the sequel =]. i really didnt expect jet to be the rebel dude ^^'.

XD lexi-chee

Damn this girl is strong and such a martyr that it can get old. I mean I adore there character and how selfish she is being and how she is putting the needs of others before her own but everyone once in a while can't she put her needs before all others. I mean I love the character and how well you have her down and I even enjoy the established (establishing?) plot but..that's Katara for you.

The description of the necklace sounds so beautiful.

Oh, Aang, if only you knew.

This was great. I read it from start to finish and I loved every word of it.

And I absolutely adored the little fights and spats these two would have. You kept them beautifully in character and I'm eager to read more.

And Iroh, gosh, it's so RARE to read a IC Iroh and props to you for making him the same kooky uncle we love. I adored every scene he was in.

Actually, in short, I LOVED this fic. I think I'll run ahead and read the next one now.

Awesome climax there too. Great fight scenes. Added to the greatness.

Wow, you wrote all this in ten days? You're even more amazing than I thought! XD Great story! I adored Lu Zuo! X3 And the ending was epic!

You know I wasn't sure at first. Its been an interesting take, but I wasn't sure if I would really like it.
I have to say I don't like it, I LOVE it.

It's awesome. And now with that said, I must go back to reading!