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anime93
2009-11-22 . chapter 1
I want to ask for your help, but, in the spirit of reviewing, I LOVE all of your Avatar stories. there is a fanfiction i read once, and i can't remember the name of it, but i can remember some things about it. It takes place during the eclipse. Zuko and iroh are katara's "prisoners" in the north pole. on the day of the eclipse, both firebenders are rendered helpless to the cold, and Katara takes them to a hot spring in the north pole. It is a Zutatra fic. and i cab't seem to get it out of my head, so if you can help me gind it, i would be forever gratefull to you, and maybe, if i ever get around to writing anything i can see about advertising your stories abit? anyway...i'm DESPERATE, so any help would be appreciated.

In awe of your amazing writing abilities(no that is not flattery, its the truth), anime93
anautumnsuicide
2009-11-18 . chapter 22
Haha i love the ending. It made me laugh out loud, go 'Oh no' and be really excited because i know theres a sequel (:D) all at the same time.

i noticed the sequel isnt completed too (D:)
shiney32
2009-11-01 . chapter 22
That was a really great story, I especially love the children and zuko being a dad :) great work!
Lealfaithful
2009-09-11 . chapter 22
I just loved it! It was creative and personal, and the idea was sometime I don't think God would have thought of. ;D I love idea so much, it is hard to explain.

I like how Mai died (NOT BEING MEAN OR ANYTHING)it made the story better. I love the children, that was just great. I would have had Lu Zuo say "Mommy!" to Katara as his first word or something, but that doesn't matter. I like how Katara taught Maiko waterneding moves.

I was VERY happy with this story, and I LOVE the way you ended it with Aang (not having there was a good move). It will keep me up tonight. So much for homework.

~Lealia
elfrowen
2009-09-07 . chapter 22
This is one of the most romantic stories I have read in a long, long time. Everything in it was perfect from start to finish, and I will be adding it to my collection of gems.

Thank you for the wonderful and beautiful experiance.
Dreaming 11
2009-07-28 . chapter 22
LOL! Aang is HILARIOUS!
Shay Durrow
2009-07-27 . chapter 22
Not going to lie, I've seen this plot done before on multiple occasions...but none of them were remotely as good as this. Good writing can reenergize the most-used plot and you've done just that.

This was a joy to read and I thank you for taking the time to write it.
SasuxSakufan
2009-07-10 . chapter 1
This looks interesting.
helloheart
2009-06-07 . chapter 22
Breathtaking. Just, breathtaking.
Chelsea
2009-05-31 . chapter 22
I highly enjoyed this fanfiction. It was well written and very entertaining. Of course there were some spelling mistakes but everyone makes those. I loved the mystery of the shadow that destroyed the Fire Nation. I was half scared that it was Aang commiting those crimes but it was an amazing plot twist to have been Jet. I can't wait to read more!
selina
2009-04-06 . chapter 8
And the tea drinking Iroh proves his brilliant once again. I love their getting to know each other, and I like as the nights went on their conversations got longer. I am so enjoying the way he have been a able to keep these two in character and have not rushed any of the events. It's all flowing a nice pace.
selina
2009-04-06 . chapter 4
*grins* she made him laugh.
lexi-chee
2009-04-06 . chapter 22
a really great story. well written and laugh out loud amusing at times. ^^. awesome job Rayne. i'm looking forward to the sequel =]. i really didnt expect jet to be the rebel dude ^^'.

XD lexi-chee
selina
2009-04-06 . chapter 2
Damn this girl is strong and such a martyr that it can get old. I mean I adore there character and how selfish she is being and how she is putting the needs of others before her own but everyone once in a while can't she put her needs before all others. I mean I love the character and how well you have her down and I even enjoy the established (establishing?) plot but..that's Katara for you.

The description of the necklace sounds so beautiful.
miikka-xx
2009-03-30 . chapter 22
Oh, Aang, if only you knew.

This was great. I read it from start to finish and I loved every word of it.

And I absolutely adored the little fights and spats these two would have. You kept them beautifully in character and I'm eager to read more.

And Iroh, gosh, it's so RARE to read a IC Iroh and props to you for making him the same kooky uncle we love. I adored every scene he was in.

Actually, in short, I LOVED this fic. I think I'll run ahead and read the next one now.

Awesome climax there too. Great fight scenes. Added to the greatness.
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