so sad...

You really like to explore that darkest realms of the psyche, don't you? I was especially sickened by the Houndour's eating of the dead Pokemon... (especially since the Pokemon never really die, they merely faint until you get them to a Pokemon center)

nothing more poignant than an evil(the organization) being purely evil, and to constantly be incurring victims, and to make what seem like evil (the Pokemon) really unfortunate victims tormented more so than those they attack.

Gruesome. Sad. Touching. Well-written. Good job.

Just wanted to say that this was the first pokemon fanfic I read, and it still affects me to this day. A wonderful, dark , enthralling piece of work.

OMGOMGOMG! I shall now proceed to bawl my eyes out This is a 5 star oneshot! It's so sad!

Midako: Nice story. I-

Midako's little brother: that sounded really sarcastic, sis.

M: IT WASN'T MEANT TO BE! Ahem. As I was saying, this is a nice story. I am probably one of only... well, two, since you wrote this, people in the world who like a *deep* Pokêmon story.

MLB: God knows I don't.

M: Shut up, you. Anyway, keep up the good writing... I'm going to go check out your Author's page now to see what other goodies you've written. _

MLB: You're not gonna read anything with good battles in it, are you?

M: ... Maybe.

MLB: Don't tease me... *evil snicker* zit-face.

M: SHUT UP! You know, YOU have to go through this in a few years, too.

MLB: O_o

M: That's right. Now be a good boy and clean up your room a little- I'll fix you a sundae if you do...

MLB: WHEE! Ice-cream...! *dashes off*

M: Well, hope we've entertained you. I'm going to go now and check out your other work... lucky that I can see otôtochan's room from the computer desk...

Saitô Midako and little brother

Bwaaaaaaaaaaaahh! You're turning my day into Bawl-fest 2002. (a very articulate and pained story).

Weehe, the undying faithfulness of the abused. That really is sad. You have to feel really sad for the Houndoom, to be so dis-uh, I can't think of the word, well basicly lost all will that it would just sit there and let it's neck be slashed with out any resistance what so ever.

...how sad

so sad...poor houndour, my favorite pokemon...

I love Houndours, this one should've kicked this girls butt and run off.