A heads up : The first time that you mentioned Ashe's name, you spelled it wrong. There's also an extra quotation mark where Penelo questions Larsa if he wants to get married for an heir, as well as a few grammatical errors here and there. They weren't frequent, dear, so don't worry. (:

Otherwise, I absolutely love this little one - shot! <3 It made me laugh quite a bit. :D

Really, the thought of Vaan busting in on Larsa and Penelo during the courting/wedding process later on brings me endless amounts of joy. I wonder if he would try to confront Larsa or just whisk Penelo away, so there would just be a series of continual kidnapping.

This was really funny. A little rushed, but very good! Larsa's funny... and I'm glad he's older yay! All throughout the game I was like "Why can't Larsa be five years older?"

good job

I find that I love everything that you write.

Oh, this is funny. Lol. Truly wonderful piece this is.

Oh that Larsa. Sneaky little Emperor...
I love that kid. xD

Poor Penelo was completely clueless.
Hehe...Vaan as a pet. ~

Very cute.
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I really liked this it was ...funny and odd. Hah.
You know honestly...the way Larsa is acting reminded me of Seymour from FFX...O.o

simply wonderful!

Larsa wins. That is all.

Oh! KEEP HIM AS A PET, I SAY! KEEP HIM! Er, yeah. Funfunfun! Cuteness was... erm, cute? >_>

XD *EX-DEE EX-DEE*

. . . that was totally awesome and completely adorable. ♥

LOL LOL LOL

now i DEFINITELY gotta hurry with the game and see the chara.

this fic was darn funny and cute.

larsa DOES sound nuts

Aw... Larsa IS a manipulative little brat, but that's why we love him so much... XD

so cute! please make more fics like this, its so funny! nyahahahaha well yeah, i think we should all place larsa and penelo fics! larsaxpenelo whipee! haha
well yeah, thats basically it, love your story this has got to be in my faves!

larsa IS a manipulative little...brat?.he is manipulative but not a brat! ok take VAAN as a pet? that's fine i hate him anyway... :) and (if this is a part of the main story i'd cry)8 of 10