 stephie 23 2007-12-10 . chapter 1Hey, I can't believe you have so few reviews!! :( It was really well written. Only thing I might have liked a bit more of would be a longer 'battle scene'. It ended quite easily, and quickly. Okay yes the one sentence here is 'akward' but I just wrote a 3 hour exam and I'm tired! So ignore the grammatical errors please, and continue to write! :) |
 Burning Touch 2007-02-26 . chapter 1I just found this and, as a fan of the show, I have to say I love it! The characters seem to all fit perfectly with how they are usually portrayed. And I especially love the part about Dean taking the grammar test. Its a good way to teach grammar, and write a little story on the side. Great job! |