Nice story. Nice twist of things.

Though Captain Mitchell's name is William, not James.

yah really know how to pull at the heart strings i came close to crying

good story but i'm confused about what happened. Did Dana die? And if so, how?

Wow! I loved this tale. A very poignant and heartwrenching tale of love found and lost coupled with a touching father/daughter reunion that was much needed.

Exceptional work and I absolutely adored this tale.


Pern

P.S. - this one is going into my C2 as soon as I submit the review.

very good, i take it you don't support a dana carter relationship though