Aww, that's sad! Hope there's a sequel to this; a demonstration of Daniel's confidence and perseverance would be splendid. (:

Aw I really love it!

that was soo cute and sad~!
-liz

best betty story I have read so far... I love you for it.

Wow I love it, I think you should continue, you could do great things with this story!

Aw. Good and Angsty. Thank you for writing it.

Wow this is so angsty. I love it and this is going on my faves :D

I just love this. It's so sweet but sad at the same time. Write another where he get s the girl. :)

this is the tenth time ive read it and it still makes my heart stop. Plz write one where he gets the girl

aww, aww. I love it.

Sad but beautiful. Daniel's all grown up. Well written.

At the end of this fic all I could think of is this "If you love something set it free if it comes back its meant to be!" Your fic has shown that Daniel has grown as a person. "Love is not selfish." Sometimes to love somebody means to let them go because its for the best. Even though it hurts as hell. Great Fic!

I absolutely love your Daniel. A bit selfish, and spoiled, and dark.

oh. that was just gorgeous... *wipes tear*

That was quite superb. One of the best one-shots I've read. You captured the characters very well, and you said so much in so few words. Very nice work.