WOW AWESOME
LOVED IT
WHEN'S THE NEXT CHAPTER?

Hi, just want to say that I love your Fan-Fiction, though, in all honisty(sp?), it's hilarious. But can you tell me who who's *looks sheepishly* I'm horrible when people do that. So, anyways, I would really like it if you could contiune, thanks!

WTF?

lol I like this! I hope you continue soon^^ AND TELL MIRIKU TO UPDATE TOO XD

Oh I likey!. I like Green Day too! please continue!

Please burn this story. This story has nothing, and I mean NOTHING to do with Yuugiou. It's based on a bunch of worthless self-inserts (all Marysues by the way), and it's a mockery of the characters we all know and love.

You must have been on crack writing this, yes?

^_^ *flyingtackleglomps* AWESOMENESS!

Kimiru: ...Cursed, hmm? That can't be good...

Me: *rofl* BTW, my hair is brown. It's just got blond streaks in it. ^^; UPDATE SOON, PLZ!

I agree with the other two reviewers, I almost threw up. They are exaclty right, you need to grow up and start writing like a decent person, because this looks like second grade chicken scratch.

Honestly, ignore the first two reviewers - I agree with Miriku! While I was reading this I toppled from my chair with laughter. Now I have a bump on my head >.<

Anyway, more chappiez please!! XD

*ROFL*

Kimiru: *sniggers* I wish someone had just tripped him, though...

Me: Ya can't have everything. UPDATE SOON, PLZ! *** shotgn at previous two reviewers*

Well, your first reviewer said it all. I threw up in my mouth a little, especially when I saw the cheesy script format, the Marysue who doesn't even have a Japanese name, and on top of that--horrendous grammar.

Get the hell out of this fandom before you're introduced to the foot-in-the-**-technique. Come back when you have enough guts to write a coherent story, of which doesn't revolve around your sick fantasies and 'oh so pathetic' Japanese fangirlish language.

And if you're evn thinking about a plot that revolves around the 'new millennium' thing, then forget it.

Even worse, this story isn't even funny at all.

Great, another Self-insert-sue-from-our-world-meets-Yugioh-gang-type fic. Marvelous, just what this section needed. More tripe. Also, although your Japanese is slightly more up to scratch than most of the stuff I see here, it is still very annoying. Next, there is no explaination as to why the computer spits out the Yugioh characters, although I notice you have gone for the six OMG Major Hawt! boys. When will you people learn that there are other characters in Yugioh? Anzu/Tea, Pegasus, Honda/Tristan, Joey, Grandpa, Mai, Isis, Weevil, Rex, Rebecca, Dartz, Shimon, Mana, Mokuba, the three dark riders, Noah Kaiba, Serenity, Kisara... The list of forgotten characters goes on and on. In your profile, you list a load of fake items. Now, if my memory serves me right, those were The Millennim Chain, The MillennimDagger(partly owned by Miriku), The MillenniumCheese Grater(only grates SHADOW CHEESE!), The Millennium Piece,The Millennium Pillow, The MillenniumArmor, The Millennium PillowCASE, The Millennium Chatroom, The Millennium Harp, The Millennium Papyrus + Paint, The Millennium PowerPoint Presentation and last but not least-The Millennium Bubble Gum. You do realise of course, that the original items were created by sacrificing a whole mother freaking VILLAGE! And what happened? They were used to summon the lord of darkness. Great. By my count, there were seven millennium items, which took 99 souls to create. You've made up 11. If we divide 99 by 7 we get 14.142857 recurring. That is how many souls it took to make each item. If we times that by 11 we get 155.571428 reccuring souls. You've got a lot of blood on your hands.
Please note this is not a flame-this is construtive critism. If you know what that means, which I doubt.

Oh, and by the way, Marik wouldn't stand there and gape at your self insert. He'd grab her and hopefully kill her, putting her out of our misery.