Now that's how the episode should have been. Thanks for this!

Nice work. I liked the angle you took with this as well as your writing style. Thanks for a very pleasant read.

This was lovely and so eloquently written. I found it interesting that the last line not only perfectly described the resolution to the story, but your writing style, "delicate and beautiful"... thanks for sharing it :o)

M and L, It's great to read Voyager fanfic that deals seriously with the subtext of attraction so many of us saw and appreciated in the series. This story shows a wonderful insight into what the characters might well have been thinking during this very pivotal episode. You write beautifully, as well, which adds to my enjoyment of the tale. I'm hoping your new-found fascination with Voyager leads to many, many more stories of this quality!

Another fantastic story! I love it!

I'm not a big fan of Star Trek- (so much so, that most of this fic did not make sense to me.) I am however, an avid fan of great writing. This piece is beautiful and elegant in its prose. Excellent work. .