A great poem fic. Very good.

Had to come and check out some of your other PotC fics after reading Baby got Boat.

This was great. Once again very creative.

You lyrically weave an intense sense of dread into the verses!

Again, nicely done!
Cheers!

I like how each set of lyrics seem to be from different perspectives: the first version from the Kraken's prey, the second from Will (or at least that's what I like to imagine), and the third quite definitely from Davy Jones and the crew of the Dutchman.
I also agree with Niph's review below me, you should definitely try some "Jack Sparrow" lyrics, or perhaps some for the "He's a Pirate" track on the COTBP soundtrack.

I absolutely love your songs! You're very talented! Would you write lyrics to more of the soundtrack? "Jack Sparrow", maybe ;)
Anyways, I love it!

*shivers* so dark and menacing... I LOVE IT! =D
My buddy CJ, (who is also my review stalker) would love this stuff, I'm SO recommending this.
Guess I'll have to read your other one too.
I think I like the 3rd version best.

Keep writing,
soupie (I'd say "and I'll keep reading" but how can you improve on this?)

Yay! More lyrics! On my OTHER favorite Pirates song! Very good. Very dramatic. Very dark. Incredibly Kracken-ish.

Me: *shaking* C-c-c-creepy... VERY c-creepy... *faints*
Jack: Oh, c'mon! It's just a little beastie! *flashes a wide grin*
Me: Yeah... Whatever you say... R-run! *runs*
Jack: *shrugs and continues to drink rum*

Good job, love! Yeah, I'll have nightmares of Kraken now. I LOVE his and DJ's themes in soundtrack. And Jack's, of course.

You have so much talent it should be outlawed!:) translation:LOVED IT!