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melissaeverlasting
2008-02-21
ch 13,
abuseI love it! Sorry for not reviewing every chapter, but I loved them all, actually, only two things stood out to me:

1) Um, "Ror"? In season two's "Like Mother, Like Daughter" Rory said that no one calls her that "unless provoked".

2) Rory's not addicted to coffee yet? I'm 14 and I am. But whatever... pretty much my entire life revolves around the Gilmore girls.

--Melissa
gilmoregirlsismycrack
2007-06-17
ch 13,
abuseI know this hasn't been updated in a few months, but I think it's great! I've always wanted to know more about the Gilmore girls prior to season one, and I think you did it perfectly. Great job, and update it again if you can. I'd love it if you did. xD
jlrock
2007-04-29
ch 13,
abuseYour storie is great! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
mcknightbabiie
2007-04-10
ch 13,
abusehaha.. lorelai a nun?

and omg.. the boring book and unpronouncible author.. too funny
CaraB
2007-03-13
ch 13,
abuseI just found this today and I love it! I really like how you didn't bring Luke in until later. I think a lot of stories really rush that and I like the ones that stick to the shows timeline. Also, my favorite was when Lorelai met Luke... Her little tangents were perfect and very Lorelai!

Great job and I can't wait to read more!
bianca89
2007-02-16
ch 13,
abuseHe's a goner. Lorelai never dated anyone for more than three months until Max. Poor Luke, to have her brazenly discussing her boyfriend in the diner. OUCH!
justawritier
2007-02-15
ch 13,
abusegreat chapter. Luke jealous is always funny. pls update soon.
Curley-Q
2007-02-15
ch 13,
abusePlease continue soon!
mcknightbabiie
2007-02-10
ch 12,
abuselol good coffee... frankenstien rant.. this story gets better and better!
mcknightbabiie
2007-02-10
ch 11,
abuseive changed my feet before... makes all the difference! lol great story!
mcknightbabiie
2007-02-10
ch 10,
abuseadorableness... its sad that lorelai was soo sad...
mcknightbabiie
2007-02-10
ch 9,
abusethat was soo cute!
Curley-Q
2007-02-09
ch 12,
abuseGreat chapter! Pleaes continue
justawritier
2007-02-09
ch 12,
abuselol. okay that was really funny. That sounds alot like me which is not a good thing is it? lol. Anway, awsome chapter. pls update soon.
BloodRed13
2007-02-09
ch 1,
abuseI like this story; You can really feel the drama.
Keep up the good work, and good grammer and spelling.
Update soon!
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