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| melissaeverlasting 2008-02-21 ch 13, | abuseI love it! Sorry for not reviewing every chapter, but I loved them all, actually, only two things stood out to me: 1) Um, "Ror"? In season two's "Like Mother, Like Daughter" Rory said that no one calls her that "unless provoked". 2) Rory's not addicted to coffee yet? I'm 14 and I am. But whatever... pretty much my entire life revolves around the Gilmore girls. --Melissa |
| gilmoregirlsismycrack 2007-06-17 ch 13, | abuseI know this hasn't been updated in a few months, but I think it's great! I've always wanted to know more about the Gilmore girls prior to season one, and I think you did it perfectly. Great job, and update it again if you can. I'd love it if you did. xD |
| jlrock 2007-04-29 ch 13, | abuseYour storie is great! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! |
| mcknightbabiie 2007-04-10 ch 13, | abusehaha.. lorelai a nun? and omg.. the boring book and unpronouncible author.. too funny |
| CaraB 2007-03-13 ch 13, | abuseI just found this today and I love it! I really like how you didn't bring Luke in until later. I think a lot of stories really rush that and I like the ones that stick to the shows timeline. Also, my favorite was when Lorelai met Luke... Her little tangents were perfect and very Lorelai! Great job and I can't wait to read more! |
| bianca89 2007-02-16 ch 13, | abuseHe's a goner. Lorelai never dated anyone for more than three months until Max. Poor Luke, to have her brazenly discussing her boyfriend in the diner. OUCH! |
| justawritier 2007-02-15 ch 13, | abusegreat chapter. Luke jealous is always funny. pls update soon. |
| Curley-Q 2007-02-15 ch 13, | abusePlease continue soon! |
| mcknightbabiie 2007-02-10 ch 12, | abuselol good coffee... frankenstien rant.. this story gets better and better! |
| mcknightbabiie 2007-02-10 ch 11, | abuseive changed my feet before... makes all the difference! lol great story! |
| mcknightbabiie 2007-02-10 ch 10, | abuseadorableness... its sad that lorelai was soo sad... |
| mcknightbabiie 2007-02-10 ch 9, | abusethat was soo cute! |
| Curley-Q 2007-02-09 ch 12, | abuseGreat chapter! Pleaes continue |
| justawritier 2007-02-09 ch 12, | abuselol. okay that was really funny. That sounds alot like me which is not a good thing is it? lol. Anway, awsome chapter. pls update soon. |
| BloodRed13 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseI like this story; You can really feel the drama. Keep up the good work, and good grammer and spelling. Update soon! |