This is fantasitc. I'm on chapter 10 at the moment but I couldn't resist reviewing anyway. I said I'd read this one day and now I'm doing it. You didn't half right a lot ;)
Well done you! I'm adding this to my stories list, its really good how you've created so much new content. You've managed to create whole new places a huge ammount of characters in fact its more a fantasy novel than a fanfiction. This is very good stuff! - must read more.

I really liked this story.

i think the first time i tried to read this, and it was a long time ago, i was lost in the mass of new names in the first chapter. now, though, i've managed to put names to faces and just couldn't stop reading... i loved the first two parts especially, but that's not to say the other two aren't awesome. i love that quy ling adores kei sa, and how all the pieces are falling into place for bondage and honor... i know i babble like an idiot, but i can't help myself. you're the best. i hope part 5 is coming soon! :)

I don't think I mentioned this before: the Vyrenchi rock _

And so do you, by the way :) Keep it up, wordsmith :D

Pretty good. Just a few things

The Lin Quay live on earth.

All other worlds are other dimentions not in space.

The reason MK1 hapend in the first place was so that shang tsung could invade earth. So access to it shouldn't have been as easy as it was.

Grate story though

8.5 out of ten

Mmm ... me like story! I love your other MK stories too. I just finished Bondage. Verrrry good. Keep it up!

It's very intriguing. Good use of all those crazy Asian names! and hey, Ming Yuen, my Chinese name is Ming!

Very cool. Keep writing.

i like this, keep writing