wow. Your writing style is really amazing, and after reading this i can just say im really shocked you ever bothered reading mine. Your description of the mako treatment was so realistic!

Okay. I just had to tell you. This had to be ... OH MY WORD. Okay, this is one of the greatest fanfics I have ever read. I keep on reading it over and over and over again. You are an amazing writer. You keep on drawing me into the story. I actually tremble when I read it. I love it. That's all I can say. I love it!

You are amazing :3

Sweetheart, before I review this story I would like to tell just how completely you have made my day. I am so happy you like it so much, you have seriously completely revamped my motivation. Thank you so so so so so so *deep breath* so so so so so so much. As for the French, sorry about the accents, I was going based on Protege Moi the Placebo song, and I looked up the lyrics to see if there were any accents (I'm completely french illiterate, athough I can sort of sing the song and sound like I know what I'm singing) and there were accents in that set of lyrics.

Gotta love the internet ;)

SO. This was utterly amazing. The descriptions of mako/Jenova cell treatment were stunning, it was like I could feel it off the page. I love Sephiroth's interferance. Your work is fantastic and your style is great. KEEP WRITING, you are so good.

Weird story, but pretty cool.

I really like this. Excellent writing, very nice imagery and the style suits the confusion in Cloud's mind.

The only thing I could say is that I don't think you need the italics for word emphasis. I don't mean the speech italics, I mean sentences like "He was so cold." - I think that works fine without putting 'cold' in italics. The emphasis can be read naturally.

But I did really like it, suitably creepy and you conveyed Cloud's feelings really well.

Beautiful. I love it. This is one of my favorite pairings next to Zack(Zax)/Cloud. I hope you continue. This is very well written.