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Aurora Hargreaves
2009-07-23 . chapter 11
Loved this. Sweet and heartfelt. Exciting and suspenseful (loved that a lot).
Mother Of Bella and Andre
2009-04-24 . chapter 2
Reveiw for Ch.1-2

Hola! Ok let me say one thing: I LOVE CHEESECAKE! its like the second coming of Messiah! Freaking Awesome. O.o YuGi's Mother? HORRAY! I dont remember her in the anime or manga... then again its been a while.

XDXD Tea sounds like the person to run a show lol HORRAy! Yugi IS GOING TO SEE YAMI BEFORE THE SHOW!
Noveltrix
2008-12-13 . chapter 1
Kombanwa!! 83 I am reviewing on Chapter 1 because I can! XD This story was a pretty good read for me! Especially the angsty, dramatic, suspenseful parts! T^T I cried when Yugi died! It was so sad! The only thing was that I don't really support
Puzzleshipping, but this one is actually not all that bad. (I don't have anything against yaoi, or gays, it's just I don't see these two as liking each other in that way.)At first, I thought Aziza was slightly border-line Mary sue-ish, but as the story moved along, I began to like her more!! =3 She's pretty cool. I have a surprise for you too! I found it funny that Kaiba was getting insulted and hit, but it also was a little too much because I usually find respect for him however cold he might be. Here, it was kind of fun to just have him act like a jerky idiot and pay for it! XD That villain of yours was something else too! D8 Scary. She is worse than any villain I've come up with yet! Wow. And such a little girl too!
Amber Pegasus
2008-09-07 . chapter 11
I loved it. I give this story two thumbs up.
MangaAngelAtemsLover
2007-07-05 . chapter 11
Honestly, I never thought I'd like a Yugi X Atem story ever... but this was too sweet! X3 10/10 if you ask me.
Protector Of The Nameless
2007-06-15 . chapter 11
Yay! I loved this story! Please write more stories after If My Heart Had Wings or maybe give me some pointers on writting a YYxY Fic.
Danica Loy
2007-04-06 . chapter 1
All right! I said I would read your stories and I am...slowly, I have other things to do, but I might as well review this first chapter. Very good start I can't wait to read more, when I find the time.

Again, I am real stickler about grammer, but I will let it go for now...nice cliffhanger ending, if there wasn't another chapter to this I would have killed you! \

Also, I love the line relating that Yugi is still as short as ever though slightly exaggerated still funny. Like I said, other than grammer, I think, this is really cute beginning, now if you excuse I have to go, but I will read the rest of this!
Sea Queen
2007-02-24 . chapter 11
so sorry it took so long to read and review this!^~^ gomen! this was a great story and i loved how u included the whole gx thing in this!
the one good thing that came form taking so long to read this was that i got to read it all the way to the end! speaking of end, i so need to write again...
n e way, this was a really great story!
Mystik Genie
2007-02-12 . chapter 11
you really like high schol musical don't you, bless
awesome fic, beautiful ending. i dont get how both Atem and Yugi can be the fathers, but you fic, ur rules. [unless it was a 2 egg fing and their fraternal twins-then i get it]

btw I LOVED namonkai too, you chose well
mdizzle
2007-02-11 . chapter 11
Hey, you finally finished. Very interesting choice of songs. Never would have thought of that one. Well now that you're done with this one could you give me a hint of your next project?
Atemu Yugi Lover34
2007-02-11 . chapter 11
*claps* Bravo! What a wonderful story!! Loved it to death! All the characters were perfect and I loved all the OC's! They were simply amazing! Until another story, ja ne!
Atemu Yugi Lover34
2007-02-06 . chapter 10
*giggles* This chapter was cute! It had fluffiness...and it showed the characters that I've never heard of before off of YGO GX...I gave up on the show when they brought 'the shadow games back' as they were sealed when Yami went to the afterlife and the millennim items were destroyed. So yea...that's what happen to me. Anyways, great chapter! Update soon plz.
mdizzle
2007-02-06 . chapter 10
I liked how you put the GX gang in. Very nice idea. Well seeing as how you're almost done I would like to make a suggestion for you next story project. I think it would help increase your author skills if you did a crossover of some kind. I don't care if it's DP/FOP just as long as it's a crossover of some kind. Look at it as me giving you homework so you can become a better author.
Yami-Yugi3
2007-02-03 . chapter 9
Aw so cute. ^_^
Atemu Yugi Lover34
2007-01-30 . chapter 9
YAY! A happy ending! Well I gotta run...I still have homework to do. Sorry for the shortness of this review! Until next time!!
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