cool story.. great start... keep it up...

O, an apocalypse. reminded me of that time in environmental studies when one of my classmates asked it global warming would cause an apocalypse.
anyway, the whole 'this world is about to end' thing isn't the kind of story i'd usually read, but like always, ya nailed it!
gawd, random... dean just attacking the demon then dragging her out. kinda makes me laugh, picturing it, but it does kinda seem awkward, if you get me.
great story, i just kinda got lost around the last couplea paragraphs, but i can't wait for the next chapter anyway!!

Suan

this is really good. i'm intrigued- is the key a what or a who? can't wait for updates!!