Heh, I like the last line. I can see Sephiroth feeling like this. The writing does go a bit overboard at times though... like: 'petrified zephyrs blew rigidly at his face, forcing him to sheath his hues in his lids.' Er, what? Do you mean he shielded his eyes? So yeah, I'd say there's quite a lot of purple prose here which could do with toning down.

Your disclaimer is not creepy, because I think along those kind of lines too. :D

Neways, I really like the descriptions in this- and there's such *Sephiroth* kind of phrases, like, the dirt wasn't meant to stain his soles, and the whole God business _ You really put him in character, it's a lovely lil drabble.

So there IS gonna be a continuation? Update soon!

winteR x

Your disclaimer is creepy.

I like this story. Also: w00t! First reviewer!

As it doesn't say COMPLETED at the top of the screen, I can only assume that there is more to come. More please!