Great story. Keep up the good work and update soon!

...BALLS.

Oh, suspense...!
So does the person know who Akuma is?

Meh? This one falls short of your usual standard mate! Since you said it was writers block, well, ah, I sense a big load of fights soon to come.

Ja

Scaleboy

Great story Draye!! It's not cliche or anything like most of the other new demon fics I've read.

...Hm. Short.

I see... so what happens next?

God DAMN you, woman!
WHY DO YOU DO THAT? THIS CHAPTER WAS ENTIRELY UNEVENTFUL!

GET EFFING ORIGINAL.

FINALLY. Dude, I was starting to think you pulled an SAZ on me here. Huh. So what now, Akuma goes crazy and then random shit happens because the writers block bunnies bite you?

Ah ha, you should have saved that last part for later in the story, see if any one remembered the raccon. Oh well. siblings are nice arn't they? Heh, on with the story please!

what are you now, his advertiser? I can't belive you named him zafe...I'm calling him devon!! HUH! so what now?

omg! this is so good! i love it! u reviewed "Distant Dream" So I'm reviewing yours! write more plz!


kitsune chan

This is just a sweet chapter. Can't wait for more.

Aw.