It's more like poetry than a story, but I like the effect. It's an interesting picture of people who fight hollows, and what they do. Keep up the good work.

I like how you did this. That cold, composed threat challenge that it's Ishida...nice drabbleyfic:D
I hope you write more bleach fics, I really enjoy that show, and since I really like your RK ones, I'd like to see how you construct these.

aw...THAT'S IT?! u shuld have Ichigo's Hollow come out and rape Ishida.

Buwahaha... I've already reviewed this on my brother's account, but screw. You know, I always thought this was about Ichigo, not Ishida @_@;; Anyway, so short T_T

--Duckii

This is exciting, and leaves me with a kind of wound-up anticipatory feeling. I really like the way you write!

~Heather

Nice one! Reads almost like poetry. The outrage and contempt against Hollows comes through quite well, yet there was also a sense of cold composure about it too. Interesting combination!

I don't like the tense you used T_T But it was still interesting... ^_^V

Good job, and write some more Bleach oneshots :P -- how about a romance one xP -grins madly-

--Cyravil

Nicely done :) I like the way this flows. *hugs*