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Friendly Neighborhood Pervert
2009-06-19 . chapter 1
Indeed
Crazy PurpleSage
2008-04-27 . chapter 1
Yosh! That was awesome. I was expecting a ItaNaru, but that was even better! Plus, Naruto made ANBU before Sasuke, oh yeah. And Naruto still had a family. Perfect! Excellent!
SnowWolfSpirit
2008-02-22 . chapter 1
That was very good.
I think though that you could have made it a lot better by continuing it.
The way you ended it was very good however and I would be okay with you leaving it as it is.
If you do choose to continue it then thank you, but even if you don't I am very happy.
Thank you and keep writing.
--Sui-chan ;}
Alie
2008-01-28 . chapter 1
Aaww.
7OrangeSun
2007-06-15 . chapter 1
So cute! I always pictured Naruto as the over protective type. I was looking all over fanfiction for a story like this, it makes me giggle.
Kin Pandun
2007-05-23 . chapter 1
This is so VERY cute!

Thanks for writing,
Kin.
Phantomsnow
2007-04-09 . chapter 1
LOL! that was fun!
der kleine fuchs
2007-04-01 . chapter 1
This comment was oddly appropriate, as the last mission the two ANBU had been on together had been the one when Orochimaru had met his all too untimely demise (untimely because the old pervert should have died years ago).


I think that was the best part
kirin-saga
2007-03-07 . chapter 1
That was cute! Poor Naruto.
momocolady
2007-02-22 . chapter 1
good fic
Reaper Nanashi
2007-01-22 . chapter 1
Excuse me while I reattach my butt--it inconveniently fell off while I was laughing . . . There. Almost as good as new.

Anyway, that was very entertaining. It took a moment to figure out that certain dead people were still alive and such, but after that . . . VERY cute. I like how ITACHI is the scary one when I think that as far as visiting the Uchihas goes, in a world where Itachi didn't slaughter everyone, I would consider Fugaku to be the scariest.


--RN (LS)
uzumaki misaki
2007-01-12 . chapter 1
“What was that really all about?”

Shuddering in remembrance, Naruto turned to his bowl of miso ramen, extra-large for therapy purposes and answered,

“You really, really don’t want to know.”

That was funny!! please write more--another, longer story based on this narutoverse that you've created
XxBookScarxX
2006-12-25 . chapter 1
"giggles" that is so cute! I can totaly see Itachi as the overprotective big brother. I have also always thought that Orochimaru was a pedophile. I hope to see more from you soon, thanks.
Dark Toy
2006-12-14 . chapter 1
LOL! I love Itachi's utter over protectiveness!
cookies worst nightmare
2006-12-10 . chapter 1
lol, nice.
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