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| Cari 2008-05-04 ch 10, anon. | abuseI really liked it ^_^ Good job ^_^ |
| Cari 2008-05-04 ch 3, anon. | abuseIn in the communities, then click TV shows, then CSI, then look through the options 'til you find "Leggo My Greggo", your story should be the last one on the second page ^_^ |
| Zaik of Wake 2008-02-21 ch 10,  | abuseAh, how very disturbing... |
| Radical Pretense Gothica 2008-01-23 ch 10, | abuseThat kicked **--way better than the usual kidnapping stories. |
| kyoudragon 2008-01-02 ch 10, | abuseI felt so bad for Greg I'm just glad Nick was able to save him in a way and I'm glad he killed the thug just wish he could have done the same to the doc but hey beggars can't be choosers right. Just in case you can't tell this was wonderfully thought out and kept me on the edge of my seat. |
| Gabrielle Lawson 2007-12-14 ch 10, | abuseWow, good story. I loved it. Did think Nick pushed a little too quickly there, but a lot of what he said felt right. Greg's trauma (and Nick's) felt right. And I'm glad Nick was the one to save him. I did notice some missing words or typos here and there so you might want to comb through the story carefully and find them. This one is going on my Favorites. I'll be looking at Hard Lessons after it's finished. I'll keep my eye on it. |
| 1Pinky 2007-11-24 ch 10, | abuseOf all the "Greg gets kidnapped" stories, yours held my attention all though to the end. Great plot weaving, a clue here which leads to this, just as a story should flow. I think you nailed Brass and Grissom characters, the personalities were right on. Loved it |
| Allatum 2007-11-12 ch 10, anon. | abuseAll of a sudden I have this pressing urge to strangle something. Violently and fatally. But anyway, despite this being horribly depressing and dark (I'm scared of your mind), it is very well written and, although it freaked the ** out of me, I liked it. |
| DemonUntilDeath 2007-09-04 ch 10, | abuseThat was...absolutely amazing. There's no other word to describe it. Amazing. |
| chippendale 2007-08-25 ch 10, anon. | abuseWoo! It was god! Not even half the stories I read up here are as well planned out, or as articulately written, and I'm happy to have found it. Keep turning out more of these! |
| sUnKiSsT 2007-06-23 ch 10, | abuseawesome story! |
| Smiles Incorporated 2007-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, this is Carly (aka WitchGirl). So I was wondering if you would allow me to feature your awesome story on my new website, http://smilesincorporated.tripod. com (minus the space). Feel free to check out the site before agreeing, and then drop me a line with your answer. Thanks! Carly |
| vashsunglasses 2007-05-08 ch 9, | abuseHere I am being pedantic again... sigh. Anywho, Searchlight is a tiny little rinky dink town that probably only has about 10 buildings total, so there would definately be no hospital. I'm thinking that a person seriously injured in Searchlight would be airlifted to Vegas, Henderson, or Laughlin/Bullhead. Otherwise an ambulance trip to one of those three places would be used. I really like your story, so don't take my pickyness the wrong way... But maybe you should change things so they match local geography? Most people probably don't notice, but it kind of kept taking me out of the story (which I'd like to reiterate, is really an excellent piece of writing). |
| vashsunglasses 2007-05-08 ch 8, | abuseI don't mean to be pedantic, but Searchlight is only about an hour's drive to the south of Vegas... |
| GregsLabrat 2007-04-27 ch 10, | abuseGreat story, I luved it! Way 2 go! |