You're awesome, but I wish there was a boy in the game that didn't look like a skeleton *shudder*

Well, doesn't that suck! There's only two Touch Detective fanfics!

Show it some more love and write more, please!

i always adored this pairing, to be honest. very nice fic, i enjoyed the swear words. :3 and the grandparents cracked me up. "your gay friend'... xD

I'm happy to see I'm not the only one on earth to know Touch Detective, but to be honest, I think a cute fic with the 2 girls as children and "touch" effects like in the game would have been better. But keep going on.