Nicely done.

This is great! I LOVE IT! Those words are so right about them, both. VERY RIGHT.

And I must agree..
Hiruma is a devil and Mamori is an angel, but they both still a boy and a girl at the end. A very sweet intro, hax hax..

i like it!

It's short but good!

They really are a devil and angel

this is a really good piece :)

one liners comparing the couple i love..

it's simply brilliant. :) Good Job, keep it up :D

Although I spotted a few spelling/grammar errors, I really enjoyed reading through the things that make Hiruma and Mamori so different from each other. I especially liked all the italicized points, particularly this one: She asks for permission, tolerates and discusses / He lies, cheats, manipulates and blackmails. [I took the liberty of fixing some grammar in those two lines. :)]

you said its a collection,
its barely a chapter though!
more more!!

Aww. I loved it! Even though they are opposites, they really fit. Yay for Hiruma and Mamori!

Good way to show how they contrast! Opposites attract and all. ^_^

I guess it´s nice to read the direct obvious from time to time =D This little fanfic piece read my mind, & I could add even more!! XD

Cute!

sweet!
thanks for sharing.. hope you'll come up with more ^_^

It's nice, I like it! It's great that u can write something this good within 10 mins, update!

Awhh... So sweet.

Anyway, this is call a prologue. You must be a huge fan to be able to do this in 10 minutes.

Well, keep on scribbling things on that pen and paper!