Very cleverly done - I felt quite a jolt when I realised it was Rick that she'd left behind. Poor Cat... let's hope she does well out of this.

Lol! Truthfully, I thought Evie would turn out to be talking to the museum moggie! I laughed though, because I'm mean like that. Poor Rick!

oh lol that was an unexpected ending. certainly made me chuckle, sorry if that wasn't the response you were hoping for

eek! crazy stuff. i loved this, ardeth does need a girlfriend. well of course i thought you were talking about rick as did your super-cool narrator, but this works just as well. so great.

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WOW! That was different! i'm not sure if i liked the fact that evie likes Ardith. i might like to see what happens though.

Rick! Oh poor kid! lol...oh wow!

Anyway, you totally had me going that Evy was talking about Rick, not Ardeth! And even though I'm a huge R/E shipper, this was a nice little unexpected twist to end the story.

So yay for Cat, *tear* for Rick, yay for Ardeth, and then I suppose another yay for Evy!

Nicely written! :)

Great. I love it. Especially, the ending!

chuckle. I always wondered how she could possibly have been interested in Rick when Ardeth Bay was there ...

Please continue this was very interesante and I want to know if there will be more chapters or a sequal

Mean! That was mean! But you're forgiven, because it was still a really good vignette. And because you've written lots of Evy/Rick fic. :)

gasps That caught me totally by surprise! Not that I was totally opposed to the ending - I enjoy reading AU stories too - but I was unprepared for the ending. It was really interesting...great job! :)

::picks up jaw:: Woah. ::shakes head:: I never saw that coming-Evie and Ardeth? That can work. _ I love the end.

*hides in a corner farfarfar away from this story* It's wonderfully written, but, well, I'm a hardcore Evy/Rick fan, and so I can't exactly like it. Sorry. But other than that, it was sooooo wonderfully written. You're great. Thanks for reviewing my story!

*Evelyn Carnahan O'Connell*

Whoa.I think I just died for 1 a twist!My heart hit the floor when I read can she leave Rick for him?

Wow! This was an interesting take on an interesting subject! Good writing- a few grammatical errors, but otherwise very clear and concise with wonderful flow.