Axel he didn't realized his mistake soon enough.

slightly down but ...you know maybe...ack never mind :D

Pretty good.^^ Kinda sad yet I can see it happening. Nice Job! Keep it up.^^

wow...i dont know what to say.
its really deep

did you know your awesome XD

Haha, sorry. Too lazy to login. XP.

It's one of those super common stories, about Axel remembering Roxas whilst messing around with Sora. Don't worry thought- I'm not flaming you. Because it was great. :D

Loved your writing style. Later.

- Kaimana