XD nice

Sweet! Strange. But sweet. Don't totally get it though. -srugs- Oh well. Doesn't matter does it. How'd he find out about that anyway? Let alone get to her? Good oneshot. ^_^

I really love this.

The surrealism of it is amazing and the emotions are so closely intertwined with the words it's hard to say were the story begins and the imagination ends.

You captured the beauty of the situation wonderfully, grabbing the lustful tone and shifting it ever to skillfully.

"Moulin Rouge". I like your inspiration. Probably my favourite ever movie.

I have to say, the falling from red to red was masterfully done. I loved it so much, because we begin with a dark vermillion, (the dark tone of what she's doing), into a vibrant blush, (the lust they had) and finally collapsing into a pale pink, the subdued love they have for each other, only revealed for the end.

Loved it.

Wow. Really just wow. I wasn't sure I'd like this story what with Rose supposedly being a you know but I was pleasantly surprised. Loved it! It was well written and an awesome story to read. Thank you!

wow thats realy cool

Well, that was kinda unexpected, but then again, that could just be me being thick! Nice one. I like the biuld up though the different types of red.

aw!! really good! i was wondering why he was going through all the different shades of red, pink and everything! an di kenw it was teh doctor but still! really good! love it!

dirty! only joking great story

this is really good and PURE SMUT!
Ali

Aww, that was sweet, lovely job.

That was fabulous! it really was! Please if you weren't thinking of carrying on please do because this is great! Please carry on with this I love it! Please update this A.S.A.P!

That was just brilliant. Great fic, well done!

Good stuff.

Well...that was... ahem. That was rousing. Or should I say arousing? Great little ficklet. Thanks.