OMG! That was brilliant. I love it. We put on this play a couple of years ago and I can still recall most of the lines. Congratulations on an excellent chapter.

please update soon! this is really well done... it has the same beats and everything rhymes and you choose good words and it's very funny. :D i like it a lot! please update soon.

LOL! definitely the future trumpet section
crazy awesome jorb
too bad the song reminds me of *gAg* washington post

oh, me likie! i saw guys and dolls once, and i thought it was good. don't remember any of the songs, but this is enjoyable all the same. chapter one was brilliant... i could totally hear them. the trumpets in my band are like that, only they suck. (sigh) anyways, keep it up! this is teh awesome! and be sure to slip a drum major in there... saw you mentioned him / her in chapter one. will he / she be a bigger character? i have an obsession with drum majors... i'm infatuated with one of them in my band, and i really want to be one in my junior year. (sigh) but i'm getting offtrack. update soon! this is great! ^^

lol, short but RAD!

Almost as good as double chocolate.

P.S. Bother!
P.P.S. Ron is a woman!
P.P.P.S. John Philip Sousa is the devil.
P.P.P.P.S. I like the part where he stops moving!

haha love it i acted in guys and dolls and sang it in chorus thats awesome i love it some much add more

this is cute! i never really got into guys and dolls, so maybe this will be my chance...cute cute cute
love your stuff
sawyersgrl15

hahahahahaha
WOO TRUMPETS (are gay)
and i think thats totally gay.