Yea! Shep whump! Good job

Glad to see that John is on the mend. I never agreed with Weirs decision to exclude the Military Commander of Atlantis from this threat to Atlantis. She should have included him from the very beginning - trust goes both ways, and it was John who saved the day in the end.

Poor John...getting whumped, but don't we just like it. Loving the story and cant' wait to see what you have planned next. Update soon!

poor Sheppard, when will he be just fine after a mission...

Oh dear, poor Shep, looks like he's in pretty bad shape. Let's hope that Carson will be able to help him. Actually, poor Carson too, he does get a bit of ribbing from Rodney, doesn't he?

Wow! I just discovered this. Very cool, nice beginning, wished they had shown this in the actual show itself. On to next chap.

more please

Great start and great shep whump...looking forward to more. Update soon!

I really like this tag. Hopefully there will be more?

I'm liking your version much better than the original. Too much potential Shep whump ignored in the official version. I can't wait to read more!

This has started out very interesting. I look forward for more. :D

I like it! I really do! update soon!

starting off well. Please don't make it a long,long story - at my age I lose track after a few chapters.